|Reviews for Revolving Around Water|
| leenadavinci chapter 8 . 3/9
I love this! it needs a sequel
| BlackMagicRose7 chapter 8 . 1/29/2015
I loved this short story.
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 8 . 6/5/2014
Maya Angelou passed away, this story was nice and I enjoyed it!
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/24/2013
the story was great but the ending needs closer
| lunabloodmoon666 chapter 8 . 2/8/2013
this is really good i think you could write a awesome sequel to this and it would recieve loads of likes :)
| kagome'slove chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
| kitty2345 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
i love this story
| krixlight chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
"he wrapped his only around her mid-section ", and who is running and being chased off in the last bit? Wonderful story though
| tinabug chapter 6 . 5/12/2012
| tinabug chapter 5 . 5/12/2012
Oh I can't wait to see who scolds who
| tinabug chapter 4 . 5/12/2012
| tinabug chapter 3 . 5/12/2012
Hmmm wonder what it is
| tinabug chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
Oh my gosh I loved it loved the scene
| tinabug chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
| EdhelwenOnieta chapter 8 . 4/15/2012
awesome story...i loved it! i loved how you did the meetings with sesshomaru and kagome. also to me it seemed like sesshomaru waited till she was alone before approaching her to "observe and understand" what it was that he was trying to understand. great portrayal of the characters. a story that i will definitely be re-reading in the future and recommending if asked for good stories. keep up the fantastic work!