Reviews for Daughter of Avalon
Bellatrix Lepus chapter 29 . 6/9
Nuuu not fair i want to trade places with Melody. Im pleased with the ending though im glad Mab's not alone. Ah my fangirl heart even if Mab was the cruelest woman in the world even after all this time my heart will always be hers.
Guest chapter 25 . 11/16/2014
Please, PLEASE continue this. Please? I really like it and the story seems far from over. I'd love to read what happens next. This story is really good. Update some more?
Halewyn's Lady chapter 25 . 10/24/2011
How come I haven't reviewed this chapter before? Whatever, main point is: I love this incestuous story and hope it will continue.

Tame Melody, Mab. I know you can do it.
vbngdjdsgtfkytorueuj5eyhwryhj chapter 25 . 8/28/2011
Noooo slower updates...ah well, my school starts again next week so it'll be the same with me :( But anyway, I loved this chapter! *laughs* Melody dear, you can't run forever...
Bellatrix Lepus chapter 25 . 8/28/2011
Wow Mab's so twisted and it's amazing haha, love her majesty so much. And ooh nice way to shut Mab up, I hope she's enjoying herself :L wonder how many 'seconds' Merlin can buy hehe gutted you gots school :( cant wait for an update though. xx
Halewyn's Lady chapter 24 . 8/25/2011
Haha Melody tried to make Mab swallow light again. Fail :p

"I do not belong to you."

"And there you go again Melody. Fighting me for no reason at all."

lol perfect. Love Mab.

How could Merlin ever resist her?

Queen Mab's winning!

I fear you really don't stand a chance Melody, and Merlin as well.
Bellatrix Lepus chapter 24 . 8/19/2011
Mab moved even closer to whisper it to her. "The difference is that you secretly want me to fuck you."

That line was just delicious :D Mab is soooo perfectly in her element had the story been in her favour instead of Merlin's like your fic it'd probably have been much more Camelot. Perfect! xx
Bellatrix Lepus chapter 23 . 8/18/2011
Screw it kill Melody off if need be anything to save Mab :L Im very biased. I really dont get Melody's hatred whether it was Mab or not I'd be very grateful if someone stabbed the person who stabbed me. xx
Halewyn's Lady chapter 23 . 8/18/2011
Merlin and Melody/Mab vs Mab:


Mab's misunderstanding of human ways is sweet.

Killing mother figures seems to have become a hobby for her.
Halewyn's Lady chapter 22 . 8/18/2011
"she loves you, you idiot! But you never understood that!"

You tell him, Melody/Mab. :)

The Old Ways winning is lovely
Bellatrix Lepus chapter 22 . 8/17/2011
*squeee!* of course it's perfect letting Mab have the upper hand. Oh no poor Melody :O Mab should go save her little puppet *covers eyes in horror*
Bellatrix Lepus chapter 21 . 8/16/2011
I do adore Mab especially how she taunts Merlin and I love her amusement at Melody trying to take her crown. Thanking Merlin for creating her was fabulous see he had a reason after all. Hope Melody stays with Mab rather than going to Nimue. xx
Bellatrix Lepus chapter 20 . 8/15/2011
Oooh lovely Mab's totally carved Melody into her clone. And I love how you incorporated Mab's red ring into it. It was really well done passion and power are perfect for Mab, and it's typically Mab that she thinks Melody should have chose the colour she originally picked. xx
Halewyn's Lady chapter 20 . 8/14/2011
A second Mab how delightful.

I love the significance of the stones.
Halewyn's Lady chapter 19 . 8/13/2011
Mab-porn: I don't mind :)

I love how Mab doesn't feel physical pain.

"goddammit!" lol Melody has sure changed since chapter 1.

"Melody could never, ever trust her." aaaw
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