Reviews for The Other American
Lamashtar Two chapter 10 . 1/1/2014
I enjoyed this. I wish the clone could have been given his own life. I really wish people didn't act like clones weren't thinking, feeling entities. It's no different than a person who's been brainwashed from birth! Twins are considered to be nature's clones..
silverheartlugia2000 chapter 10 . 11/3/2012
To be honest i prefer these two in a father/son relationship if its not au but i just love the way you used the angst in this, insedentaliy i feel the same way twards a ganondorf/link fic called taming the beast, the paring freaks me out but the idea of links wolf taking over i love (plus i cant resist one were hes mute for some reason)
TwentyThreeSecondsToSunrise chapter 10 . 8/6/2012
Hi! awesome story!
I really liked the idea of cloning nations, I don't think I've actually read fanfic about it...
An Unknown Admirer chapter 10 . 3/1/2012
While I am highly displeased with the fact that, though your mind bore much fruit going into a beautiful tale, there were few willing to put words to their desires for the feat of devouring the work, there is pleasure to be found in the instance of a task completed to the extent at which your motivation was able to strike. A pity, surely, that the result was not the caliber of which you were so actively seeking, but a beautiful yarn was assuredly spun, make no mistake, my dear. Such a cantankerous fellow, that double! His end assuredly, fitting, but still warranting an emotion towards that of pity for his plight. I can understand such was not the direct intention, however,one must attempt at considering all possible angles to a story to fully understand the plausibility of further implications. It is with this grain of knowledge that I bid you adieu for now, fair lass, and continue onward in quest of new literature among like-minded fellows. Assuredly, I thank you most graciously for the bounteous feast you have given me in that of the mind!
narutofan5210 chapter 10 . 9/24/2011
Aww this was a cute story! and can I say I love your funfacts end of every chapter X3
xXAmericaXTheXHeroXX chapter 9 . 9/21/2011
I very much like this chapter. I think it might be my favorite of this story 3
xXAmericaXTheXHeroXX chapter 8 . 9/21/2011
I don't care what you say about this chapter, I as a USUK fangirl love it.
xXAmericaXTheXHeroXX chapter 3 . 9/21/2011
Bwaaaaaaaaa. I wanna give America a hug . I love your story by the way
xXAmericaXTheXHeroXX chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Love it~ Its so dramatic and awesome! XD
Nekone chapter 10 . 9/20/2011
aw~. It's finally over. Your story. I though it was cute that Al's first words after beiing taken out of that hospital was ''Arthur''. I really enjoyed reading this. No lies! And I'm really sorry that you didn't have the encouragment/inspiration to write more to the story. And the result is that the chapter came out shorter than planned. Good luck in your other stories! Can't wait to read them. (-)b
Chandinee Richards chapter 10 . 9/20/2011
Yay~! New chapter! Sorry people don't review...from now on I'll review every chapter!
LunarMiracle chapter 10 . 9/20/2011
Interesting concept...

The Alfred parts made me depressed. :(

Anyway, great writing skills and you ended the story at the right time instead of dragging it on forever!
EchoedMusic chapter 9 . 9/17/2011
I liked this chapter, it wasnt bad! But I was a little confused about who was talking when Arthur caame in with Mattie. Just letting ya know (: Hurry to update!

oh, one small fix:

he peaked open one eye.

its spelled peeked.
Hi chapter 9 . 9/9/2011


This is sooo happy TT TT
sajere1 chapter 9 . 9/9/2011


Yay hills :D /shot
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