|Reviews for Could You See?|
| Pear-Shaped chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Aww that's sweet and adorable! It was so detailed and charming, I had to bite my pillow to keep myself from screaming. I did squeal though...thank you for standing up for Tadase. Although I am a strong Amuto supporter, I never understood the need to bash Tadase. He's so cute though, so why?! Him and his sparkle attacks XD Okay, enough of my mini rant there, the ending was just so awesome! The chara change was quite comical, but quite endearing at the same time:) Please continue to make more wonderful fics such as this one!
| MoonBeams 17 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
You're definitely right! I would twitch every time I read people's comment that Tadase is gay even if he's not! .Tsk. Anyways, I love this! I'm really a #1 fan of Tadeshiko! I only review to a fanfic w/ Tadeshiko in it! In fact, I will review every single chapter as long as there's a Tadeshiko pairing! : )
| Kotohime Haku chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
THAT WAS SO SWEET.
This is my first time reading a story of yours, so I can't say anything for sure...but you're a really good writer! Although we don't see Nadeshiko often in the main story, I can definitely see this canon!
I was actually not an Amuto fan that much. I know it's just a 5 YEARS GAP but it makes Ikuto seem like a pedo-/shot
Um. Yea. I liked Tadamu for a while, but I moved on to Amuhiko once Nagihiko popped up into the story. And calling Tadase Tadagay is quite insulting. I read a fanfic before, where they seriously made Tadase gay (it was one of those fanfics where a fan of Shugo Chara suddenly falls into the Shugo Chara world and then has her own Shugo Chara and blah blah blah)-.- I was quite insulted.
I feel like I ranted more than a review ._.
| Black Swordsman chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Love it, since I too am a fan of Tadase & Nadeshiko (female) together. It is a lovely piece of work, so here's hoping for more.
Likewise, I agree with you about the whole "bashing-Tadase" thing. It was clear that Amuto was the designated pairing from the beginning, but Tadase is still the second-most important boy in the series and my personal favorite character.
Kudos to you for standing up for him, and for Peach-Pit's creations.
| RakkiiHappiiDokkiiShidonii chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
...I WILL write a very professional review one day. I will!
But that day is not today.
Oh. My. Gosh. Ri-chin, this is gorgeous! Na-chin and Tada-chan were totally in-character and adorable! n.n
You make writing seem so easy. ;-; /sulks like Tadase
I liked how you described Nade's feelings for Tadase. :) Very nice and cute. Though, also very hard for me to understand, to be honest. n.n'' It's not just your stories, though! It's every romance thing ever. _ But I think I've read enough fics/books/manga to have an /idea/ of what it's like. XD
Oh, and I loved Tadase's character change. XD Oh, Tadase... You're so silly. XD
Let's hope the Shugo Chara archive comes back to life soon! d(-.n)b
PS; *glomps Tadase* I'm sorry for once being like those meanies who "hate" you and call you "Tadagay"! ;-; But I'm clean, now! I swear!
| SheepSkater chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Another great story from the great Riri-chi! As expected, you have placed me on an emotional rollarcoaster from the beginning of the story up to the end. I've always admired your works, hoping to write at least half as elegantly and smoothly as you do. I may be sounding like I'm complimenting you too much, but I really do look up to you for ideas for my own stories. Unfortunately, I'm too...shy about posting anything else, besides the one story I have in my account so far. I've like Tadashiko almost as much as Tadamu, and this story has shown me another reason why it's such a sweet pairing. _
And I agree with you on the whole Amuto and 'Tadagay' issues we see in fandom of Shugo Chara. That's exactly why I dislike Amuto to no end. I used to be able to bear with the pairing, but it's just getting annoying. I was never able tolerate the whole 'Tadagay' thing. Just because you insult a character, doesn't mean that anything is going to change. All it shows is that the people who insult the characters, insult the creators and are very immature.
Sorry for ranting, but I wanted to express my opinions to someone who feels the same way I do. Keep up the good work!
| Shiroi Aisu chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Excuse me for this review - it's probably going to end up long, but I hope you do find the time to read this. This story is basically a needle in a haystack, I'm guessing by your rant at the end that you dislike all those stories in the SC section, too, and I must agree. Although I somewhat understand some people, seeing as not everyone is as good in English and there are so many foreign people on here (I'm part of those too, living in Europe with practically no education in the English language, at least not in middle school, which I am still attending) I'm glad that there are still people like you, writing amazing stories with amazing story lines with exceptional pairings, seeing as how this pairing never really had as much fans as others, probably also due to the common hatred towards Tadase by so many Amuto fans. Which is something I never understood either, but I'm not going to go into that anymore. I may not be such a good writer like yourself, and I'm pretty sure that if you saw my stories, standing along all the others, you would think the same thing of mine as you think of the others, probably only excusing me for at least having decent grammar, spelling and punctuation. Of course I don't know you and I'm not going to put words in your mouth or anything, and I'm also not going to rant any further. Thank you for writing such an uncommon thing in this fandom: a good story in every way. You really are an inspiration for all. Take care.
| ProfessorMeggles chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Not only do you like Rimahiko, but you like Tadashiko too? :D
I agree with the whole 'Tadagay' thing, it's quite disrespectful, plus Tadase's my favorite character...
Anyway, I loved this story a lot. It does move away from the cliche that is Amuto. Haha, excellent work as usual. :)
| Rikanchu chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Sgdfkfhdkfhk RI OMG
What is this beautiful work I'm seeing again?
...Definitely not too cliche! I approve! w)b
And... You did good job with this~ :3 LOL Tadase's character change just had to ruin the peaceful moment. XD
NAGIHIKO, APPROVE! APPROVE! APPROVE! Or else... C:
Ahaha, anyways, it was all great!
Good luck with this section! Keep writing!
From your /darling/ sister-in-law,
| Aoi Bara no Chronos chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Aww, that was so cute.
I can't believe I'm saying this, but I am gonna punch Nagi if he doesn't approve.
I was literally about to break my mouse from the cuteness. xD