|Reviews for One last candle to keep out the night|
| chyaraskiss chapter 7 . 12/23/2013
I'm confused over the transition from chapter 6 to 7. Chapter 7 makes no sense at all.
| chyaraskiss chapter 3 . 12/23/2013
It would be daughter and mother in law. Not sisters in law.
| writeratheart007 chapter 7 . 10/3/2013
I know you have it listed as 'unfinished' on the summary, but why click complete if it's not finished and why repost the first chapter in the last chapter? I hope you plan on finishing this, I actually like what you've done so far here.
| Kris chapter 7 . 10/1/2013
Why is this story listed as complete?
| EmilyWoods chapter 6 . 9/13/2013
is that it?
| Angel Went Crazy chapter 7 . 9/8/2013
It doesn't seem complete
| Hanable-13 chapter 7 . 9/3/2013
not bad.. crappy place to stop though *pout*
| Terrence Rogue chapter 7 . 8/31/2013
I'm not quite sure what his is but it's certainly not the next chapter in the story. An alternative to chapter one maybe? One where Fred is still alive.
I think you may have accidentally mis-uploaded, and if not you need to post some kind of explanation.
I do love he story so far. It's a great pairing and I love seeing the changes in the characters. I look forward to the rest of it.
| FreeSpiritSeeker chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
You've got a very nice story started here. I like the interaction between Lucius and Hermione. My one suggestion would be that Lucius would possibly be a bit more formal, even though he only has a month to court Hermione, I believe he'd do it with the utmost style. :)
| Hanable-13 chapter 6 . 4/9/2013
i rather like this one... different but similar to many others. i do hope u continue it... some time
| Hanable-13 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
one thing i will never understand is that they enacted this law (the marriage law) to get more wizards.. but one of the penalties for not going along with the law is to have their magic taken away from them.. thus depriving the wizarding world of another person... just seems.. backwards to me.
| ORgasmicPigeon chapter 6 . 1/19/2013
Cute cute cute! Can't wait for the update! Was unsure at first, hadn't thought about lucius, but you've written him rather well I think..
| Karen Bristow chapter 6 . 11/5/2012
I hope you might consider going forward with the rest of this story. If its Beta help that is holding you back, I offer you my assistance.
| Zeeksmom chapter 6 . 10/6/2012
I really love Lucius/Hermione fics but they're very hard to find. I think I've read every one that's already complete and now I'm reduced to reading works in progress, hoping the authors will finish. I just came across your story today and decided to give it a try.
I think it's great and I hope you'll continue with it. I read your author's notes and I know you've had a really terrible time this year. Perhaps writing will help a bit; if it does, I hope you'll continue your updates.
This seems like a different take on the "marriage law" plot and I like it a lot.
I don't like Ginny, though. I get so tired of the little brat always intuitively knowing everyone else's business and being so unbearably smug about it. Every time she gives advice, it's only a variant on the hideous "I'm only telling you this for your own good" conversations that we've all had. We're then supposed to thank the person who's just punched us in the gut while we admire them for their honesty. She should be taken to Warehouse 13 and bronzed! I hope she won't play much part in the rest of the story.
I hope things are a little better now. Thanks for the story,
| yarnell15 chapter 6 . 9/4/2012
I like this story. Please come back :(