|Reviews for A Bug's Life: Etiolated Flik|
| draco122 chapter 4 . 12/27/2013
that was a wonderful story. The only bad part was that it is so short.
| draco122 chapter 3 . 12/27/2013
that was wonderful i loved it.
| maltron66 chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
Great fic and the song you chose is truly AWESOME! BLACK SABBATH FOREVER! And it fits their current situation perfectly! All in all, you should expand this story.
| eriknachtmusik chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Flik is blue.
| Renesmee5550123 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
LOVED IT! omg please write more if u can cuz this was awesome! Keep up da good work :D
| Alyson F chapter 4 . 12/16/2011
WoaH! I definintely loved this chapter, it was absolutely amazing and you really captured Flik and Atta's character. And the flashback was a great touch also, great job!
| Loco Burro chapter 4 . 8/8/2011
Great story! I hope you write another one!
| Starzinmieyez chapter 4 . 8/2/2011
This was a good last chapter :) A little short, but I like the flashback part- that was amusing :D Can't wait for the sequel/alternate ending! :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/2/2011
that it? that the end!
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/1/2011
Very good! Keep writing!
| Starzinmieyez chapter 3 . 7/31/2011
Aw, this was really cute I think Atta and Flik are great together :) Just watch your spelling. In your authors note at the end, I think you meant "fun to write" not "fun to right" ;) Update soon :D
| Starzinmieyez chapter 2 . 7/28/2011
Aw, this was really cute :D How are Flik and Atta gonna get back in the middle of a storm when Flik's still injured? Uh-oh.
I think the two should just blurt their feelings out to eachother already!
Just one thing though; when writing a story, write all numbers as words, not numbers. I hope that kinda makes sense.
For example, in this chapter you put "...1 of his injuries" when really it shoud be "...one of his injuries" :)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter- keep writing! :D
| Starzinmieyez chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Hi! Please conitnue this and make it a multi chapter story; we need something decent in this archive that'll get completed. A bit of advice; put all thoughts in italics rather than brackets :) Update soon! Please continue! If you don't know how to continue (out of ideas) than PM me- I have some ideas you could use if you're stuck :)