Reviews for A Second Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please make another one |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am guessing this story is dropped also? I have thought about Keima's father being contracted, but everything else surely took me by surprise. I hope you continue this story, as it has a lot of potential. I really like this story, hope you get the motivation to start again. |
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![]() ![]() Y U POST USLESS UPDATE NOTES? |
![]() ![]() Love the chapter! Going to read next chapter after this,and noticed that's the only chapter uploaded.. PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY - -Out of order- |
![]() ![]() Hey~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love the chapter,and even though this isn't really from the manga series,I'm shocked that she's Elsie's sister :o Keima-kun is being a little OOC,but I love the story and chapter~~~~~~ Please update~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ _ Midori~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ . 3 . |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update |
![]() ![]() Would gladly read more. Keep it up :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() seems nice. It will be an harem? I really hope so! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Keima-san is acting a little bit too out of character. Usually in this situation he wouldn't and I can consider this a fact to not tell Elsea much about his secrets. Also he should go with the flow since it would cause great changes if he rushed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is er... interesting. I guess I'm just not quite used to the identities of the characters but I'll wait and see where you go with this. The line business is a bit annoying, how about using the ruler at 'Doc Manager'. The sixth button from the left in the tool bar (straight line) puts a line for dividing bits up. Just so you know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man i thought i would never see this updated again. It has a nice plot. Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hohoho Such an interesting story! I expect great things! Great things! Glad to see this wasn't some idea one shot, that would have made me Q3Q haha. Great chapter! I think it'll be interesting how things change and how Keima's pre-existing relationships will effect his captures and the memories of the girls, not to mention if he will meet new girls and such due to the new circumstances. Too bad I have no access to the light novel, it'd be an interesting comparison to the manga and anime. Good luck! - R-o-M |