Reviews for Look Alive, Sunshine
Lucehearts17 chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
this should be a full on story
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Yikes!
misssbehavin chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
just woah.
J-N-Carlo chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
OH I love it!
songs chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
This was just...sooo morbid. Yet really well-written. Just...eek.
BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Dark. Again, roles that fit the characters.
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
So dark but like... SO ENTICING.
HappyDeathFairy chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
Wow, that was pretty scary but in a good way!
Sleepy Milkshakes chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Maybe I'm just a sadist, but I love stories like this.

While this is pretty cool as a oneshot, I think that if you ever get the time, you could totally make it work as a multi-chapter fanfiction. That'd be sweet~

Stop writing so nicely. It's breaking me.

Yay~
asami357 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
You...this... holy crap. You are very twisted, but beautiful person my friend. I loved this- especially the "We just wanted to be pretty" blood on the walls. That was INTENSE. Great job!
Tukiko K chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Hmm, interesting. Well written too.
ScarletCamellia chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
This was fucked up. Beautifully. Beautifully fucked up.
Star.Splattered.Sky chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
You're right; that was pretty fucked up.

I like it ;)
KyraReid chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
i love this one, it would be a pretty damn epic long story if you did it.
zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
just like them if sasuke didnt go insane
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