|Reviews for Together|
| Joanne N.Grey chapter 14 . 7/6
The story is very well written, though there are more than a few spelling errors. And one or two grammatical glitches. But other than that I thoroughly enjoyed the story.
Also, Mikey forgave them too fast, and Raph, Leo and Donnie deserved more hell
| Andromakhe chapter 12 . 6/25
Leo and Mikey fluff is always so adorable. :)
| Andromakhe chapter 8 . 6/25
I could absolutely relate to wanting to feel warmth, the solidness of someone's body, maybe even arms around him. Good that you're showing Mikey's fear of his own brothers.
| Andromakhe chapter 5 . 6/24
This is heartbreaking. A bit extreme, since I don't think Mikey's brothers would really treat him this way, but the depression and apathy is very relatable. Poor Mikey's lack of self-worth, too. I can see how he'd feel that way with Raph's constant jabs at his slow brain.
There are some typos and awkward phrasings, but those could be caught if the story were read aloud, I think.
I'm still reading. This is very cathartic.
| Andromakhe chapter 1 . 6/24
Somewhat graphic, isn't this? Not that I mind. It's absolutely manageable. But torture fics generally aren't my thing. Maybe there should be a warning. *shrugs*
Liked the end of this chapter, with the angel that reminded Mikey of Leo. Made me go, "Awww." I have a soft spot for Leo & Mikey fluff.
| TheLadyOfSouls chapter 9 . 10/9/2015
PTSD is horrible. It never truly goes away, the best you can hope for is to manage it by understanding it.
| TheLadyOfSouls chapter 7 . 10/9/2015
They could start by fixing his room. Could you send some tissues down the internet please? I'm crying so hard reading this, I can barely breathe!
| TheLadyOfSouls chapter 2 . 10/9/2015
This story is a real weepy one. At this moment I'm thinking seppuku is too good for Leo!
| PhGim.7 chapter 14 . 1/24/2015
AMAZING story :) I literally cried the whole time :') it was GREAT! :D:D:D:D
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/11/2015
This is heavy
| Mystearica 'Primal' Fende chapter 14 . 1/5/2015
God...Its the best fix I've ever read. I seriously wonder how you'd even manage to capture how he feels so...expressively and in a way that goes with the flow? (Wait a min...did I sound a bit too jolly right there?)
Hey...I have an idea. How about you put a chapter that shows Master Splinter's POV? I know he is dead...but... a chapter that shows his reaction while watching over them? Or maybe...a companion fic?
| esmeblaise chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
*Crying my eyes out* HOW DARE YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THAT! GO TO YOUR CORNER!
(Awesome story by the way, you're a great writer!)
| Sammy8D257 chapter 11 . 5/14/2013
oh mah gwod...
You killed him...
MUST READ ON!
| Sammy8D257 chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
son of a...
I'm crying so facking hard!
WHY WHY WHY WHY
AM I READING SOMETHING LIKE THIS!?
WHY MUST THIS STORY BE SO EPICLY SAD!?
| Sammy8D257 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Oh... oh mah gwod...
*starts to sob*
This is so sad...
And I'm only on the first chapter!