Reviews for Together
esmeblaise chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
*Crying my eyes out* HOW DARE YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THAT! GO TO YOUR CORNER!

(Awesome story by the way, you're a great writer!)
Sammy8D257 chapter 11 . 5/14/2013
Fack...
oh mah gwod...
You killed him...
*sobs*
MUST READ ON!
Sammy8D257 chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
son of a...
Gwod
I'm crying so facking hard!
WHY WHY WHY WHY
AM I READING SOMETHING LIKE THIS!?
WHY MUST THIS STORY BE SO EPICLY SAD!?
Sammy8D257 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Oh... oh mah gwod...
*starts to sob*
This is so sad...
And I'm only on the first chapter!
TheAngelofFate chapter 14 . 1/6/2013
I absolutely LOVED THIS STORY! THE HURT & SUSPENSE , THE CRYING! EVERYTHING WAS SO SADLY EPIC! IT MADE ME CRY!

MY POOR MIKEY! Q.Q I LOVED EVERY CHAPTER TO THIS, ESPECIALLY THE ENDING WITH DONNIE & MIKEY! 3 IT!

& OMG EVERYTHING IS IN CAPS! I CAN'T HELP IT! I JUST LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH! XD

WELL DONE! XD
Foxyfiona chapter 14 . 12/27/2012
such a bitter sweet story. Nicely done.
Foxyfiona chapter 9 . 12/27/2012
intense
Foxyfiona chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
Wow, really impressive...
a Tale with Ears chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
This story is so sad...I am actually crying.
Pariseiffle chapter 14 . 11/29/2011
WHOA OMG THAT WAS... WHOA! AMAZAYN! THAT WAS GREAT! WHEW!
Rose Black Dragon chapter 14 . 11/18/2011
You never stop amazing me, just like Raph is Leo's best friend, Donnie is Mikey's.

Thank you for being so talented and share it with us.

Rose o
Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee chapter 14 . 11/18/2011
Perfect! It's awesome! This story needed a chapter like this to end it. Just one little critique. I noticed that you wrote "more harder" When using adjectives whose degrees of greatness/lessness can be desrcribed through -er or-est., never add more or most before the adjective. It's not grammatically correct, and I will admit that I'm guilty of speaking like that sometimes
Rose Black Dragon chapter 13 . 11/12/2011
I can't find the right words to say I am grateful for your incredible story, I had to pluck up courage to read the last three chapters... it was so satisfactory to see how Mikey was healing slowly but nicely. The scene when Leo is finally next to Mikey cradling him to sleep, was my favorite. I will never be able to repay your awesome way of portraying all this situation and its final chapters, they were just great, you should be proud. Rose will be waiting your next story eagerly (if it is about Leo) sorry for being such a spoiled brat, but I rarely read stories about the other three turtles.

Rose o

I also loved when Mikey donated some of his blood for Raph.
Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee chapter 13 . 11/8/2011
I'm glad you made the epilogue freakin' huge otherwise it couldn't have ended. I was really glad to see Raph's POV and I think you have it down pat although i was dissappointed not to see Don's POV. I mean, he was just as guilty, shouldn't he get a chance to tell his side of the story? Anyway, I'm glad things are getting better (although not a 100% never 100%)
dondena chapter 13 . 11/8/2011
This review is for all your chaps. This was a very sad, heart-touching story. It really made me sad. Especially in the parts where Leo was reading Mike's journal. And when he was fighting with him to keep him from going into the light.

After the ways they were treating him for so long, even Don and Raph needed to really read Mikey's journals too. I know it's one thing for Don to get mad when someone messes with his lab things, but he's not one that stays mad for long.

But I did write a story like this, though much shorter. But with Mikey not being so afraid of his bros.
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