|Reviews for Keeping It In The Family|
| Lauramichca chapter 15 . 4/21
Well you did warn everyone. And Hermione made her feelings about being turned known early on, so it would have been a sad end if they had got together in this story.
I think your critics only tiny source of justification for their arguments would be the categories - romance and family without angst or tradgedy or some-such, suggests that the characters listed may see a happy ending instead.
But again you did reveal that it would not happen this time. Though I do admit, when you did the final time jump I thought perhaps I had misunderstood and that Charlie had died and the still young (for a witch) Hermione would would allow a courting/love/changing after grieving for a time. but you kept to your plot and I think that is better for the story.
Thank you for sharing!
| YourDiamondAngel chapter 15 . 4/16
I'm a few years late, but it's an absolutely fabulous story! I love your portrayal of Hermione - many "Hermione is Bella's cousin" crossovers tend to make her really OOC, but it was realistic and incredibly well written. Thank you for such an incredible piece of work!
| bluechipmunk chapter 15 . 3/7
Just wanted to say I loved this piece! I'm so happy with the way it ended, and I think it was very well written. I'll definitely be looking into your other stories!
| Stephanie MRV chapter 15 . 3/2
damn i loved this. I am so happy she didnt end up with Edward. that boy will be stuck in perpetual teen aged angst forever.
| seheronelves chapter 15 . 12/18/2016
Hello! I know I'm such a late reader and this story is several years old but I just wanted to say that I loved it. I love reading crossovers like this and I was really happy with this one, especially the ending. I like reading about Edward and Hermione together as much as the next person but I'll admit, from the beginning of your story I was leaning more towards Charlie already (the fact that I absolutely adore Charlie Weasley had nothing to do with that at all, nope). I agree that Hermione would have been happier with this ending, mutual feelings with someone she trusts and trusts her back, and a life with someone who can let her live her life to the fullest. Anyway, it was really refreshing to see this kind of ending and if I didn't say it enough times, I loved this story very much. Thank you for writing it.
| mandorakat chapter 15 . 11/28/2016
that was really messed up for Edward, totally his fault but damn. really well written and interesting story.
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/18/2016
I very much enjoyed your story, it was a rather unconventional ending, and not at all what I expected, but it was very good and true to the characters. Thanks for writing it and sharing!
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/22/2016
i hate how you've made hermione and ginny bitches, you've kind of ruined them
| deemura chapter 6 . 8/16/2016
I hope when Charlie said it was rare in the US, it meant he just didn't know it
| deemura chapter 2 . 8/16/2016
I will ignore the fact that you mention Hermione is tall, I'm gonna stick to my headcannon Hermione as a small girl, but overall, so far I like your story
| SlytherinEmo chapter 15 . 7/14/2016
i loved this story! :)
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/6/2016
What a wonderful story hun. Though it left me just a tiny bit sad.
| Reyna chapter 15 . 6/12/2016
Beautiful and totally right. If he can't came to you, you don't wait around for him like a lovesick sucidal puppy. You move on.
| QueenOfTheives chapter 15 . 6/5/2016
i really liked this story. thank you for it! the ending was very good :)
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/26/2016
Your story really nice. Thanks for make this story. and i really love the endings 3 - Love from malaysia