|Reviews for Untouchable|
| MintMint chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
Aw, confuse now... _
maybe i should read your other OCs tenipuri before reading this chapter.
| MintMint chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Great! Finally can find a great YAGYUU OC story!
| ca99oline chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
There are so many OCs in this chapter. At first, I was quite confuse. I just remembered Ranawa and Tanaka. It took a bit time to recognize them. I hope you could explain more about each of your OCs' full name, their physical appearances and their connections each other.
| PurePrincess chapter 2 . 1/11/2012
I want to read more please update soon.
| kittaynumnums chapter 2 . 1/9/2012
AWWWW... T_T Kiseki's poor friend T_T WAHHHHHHH! i know what its like to loose a dad T_T i lost my dad but ANYWAYS I LIKEY~
| iSayumix3 chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Nice start. :D
| ca99oline chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Hey, this story is very good. Please continue it. It's so hard to find a good Yagyuu-OC story. '(
| celtic27fionn chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Yay! Another new story from you xD I. Love. It. :)
| xXRandomnessPrevailsXx chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Yay! Another installment of your RikkaiXOC series! And it's Kiseki-chan this time!
I like how their conversations are witty/sarcastic if not somewhat friendly. I hope I can read more on this soon, so please update! (Enlighten us about the fans over friendship... I previously thought that was something that no SANE tennis player could decide.)
| livingtodream chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I like how strong both Yagyuu and Kiseki's personalities are! Great job with both that and the relaxing story line!
Good job & keep it up!