Reviews for FEAR 4: The End of Days Prologue
elas chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
I fuck love love love love this story and fuck love it to beautiful
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
less lovey dovey more gore point man shouldnt speak and do a point man ending -my thoughts
jack stiles chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
this was amazing, you should send this plot to monolith or Warner brother games. i enjoyed every second of this, in fact it was that good i can't express my love for that story. you are a great story maker. keep doing your job.
F.E.A.RxLover chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I think its pretty kick ass but it doesent seem becket likes Alma. But thats just me
Dead Embryonic Cells chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Aw, now that is what I call a one big happy cannibal family :D I certainly hope that you will add a sequel ;)
Vanex chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Okay, my curiosity has been sparked. I'm looking forward to what happens next.
WoWMotherFan45 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Good Point Man, GOOD, eat him! Distroy the little cock sucker!

This is a very good story! I would like to read more! But seriouslly, since when was Point Man a canabal?
Sergeant Daniel chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Holy crap, this is a good story. I want this to be the beginning of F.E.A.R. 4. Beckett needs to come back alive. Anyway I can't wait to read more stories from you. Keep up the good work:D
Seventhcaustic chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Hmmm... well I don't really know what to say. I don't remember Becket being so crazy or loving Alma in any way. Point Man is a cannibal now? Now pertaining to your writing. It's not bad overall but you can do better. You just have to use your adjectives. Think about how you can word something and about how it sounds when you say it out loud. Don't use the same word twice too close together. Like when you said thrashing twice like that. Try saying seizing up or contorting the second time so it isn't repetitive. Don't say things like in came or out came.
no name chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
this is prty good although becket and pointman eating fettle is just a lil out of carecter but all in all good 1 thing that had me confused though when alma said u will always be my baby what context was she using it from was it some sort of motherly assurance or comfort? idk u werent to detailed about that but its just a lil thing thats been nawing at my brain . . .no pun intended well anyway its good hope for more see ya around XD
setsuna-kira chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
hollardude chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
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You Rock! I hated how Fettel killed Alma in his ending. Thank you for making him die in this story.
EmoBlackie chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I know that Becket here may seem a bit O.C but theres no telling how he actually is supposed to be. He was supposed to be like that of point man but still kicked ass even before the surgery. I felt Becket should have had a bigger role in there and i was pissed at Paxton and had a pen in my hand. mwahaha. I made becket like this in the story to give you the idea that he has 'Fettel' type tendancies.
Anon chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Sorry but this one didnt do it for me, the whole evil ending on any game/story just doesnt work for me (damn morales that plauge me lol) but on the upside you wrote it out very well, had a good amount of creepiness and disgusting cannibalisam but Becket just feels OOC but thats probably just me goodie goodie thing coming in to play, after all it is possible that he does snap and goes evil but again my damn morales Shreik (did i spell that right?) insitantly at me that they prefer good ending(pointman winning as if you didnt know [sacrasm directed at me not you, your awesome] {insert dog picture}) other thatn that keep it up you magnificent bastard that we all love so much in a totally platonic way (not gay) ;D