Reviews for A very desirable happily ever after
kengofangirl chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
So cute (: by the way, this is called penguinshipping. Twinleafshipping is dawn x Barry (:
Pju1996 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
If it is Kenny and dawn then it is called penguinshipping
AiLoveAkuma chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Very cute and fluffy! It's so well written! The only critique I have though, is to leave A/Ns at the beginning and/or end of the story. When it's put right in the middle, it's a bit distracting

(I don't know if I'm explaining this right -_-') It's almost like when you watch a romance movie, and before the two characters kiss or something, someone interupts them.

Either way, it's a great story! I love it! :D
Amulet Misty chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Ah the dream-waking up plot, I didn't expect that one here. Really good job for your first fic, I thought it was really cute. And yes, the only thing is that don't put in A/Ns in the middle of the story.
AniHanki chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Kawaii! I love Kengo! You did a beutifull job! Great grammar too!
LuvLov3Love chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
haha, loved Kenny :D This was great for a first fic. Just a little tip, try not putting A/N's in the middle of the story. From my opinion, I think they sometimes disrupt the story flow :)
RosesOfTruth chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Love Penguinshipping!
RosesOfTruth chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Love Penguinshipping!