Reviews for Hurt |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Every time I read the chapter titles to this story, I hear Johnny Cash singing. I've read this several times. Along with the rest of your work. Thank you for sharing these stories with us. Each and every one is amazing. Xo. |
![]() ![]() Wow, i am in literal tears, this was a beautifully written story |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter always makes me cry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was really a slow burn but in that it took them real long to be together not for them to both be knowingly in love with each other. damn. anyway it was such a great story and wow did i feel bad for sam seemed almost like a domestic abusive case which was made weirder by wveryone knowing and it just taking so long to finally end. i loved the part with paul and how it went i really really loved when leah and jake happend just the clearwaters getting better things is always good. but mostly just bella and sam and the writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another amazing story, i libe your writing style, maybe one day you will return to it |
![]() ![]() ![]() i mean, garrett was turned accidentally, and carlsisle. they were meant to only be drank. also, a human would thrash around anyway, while being literaly drank from. most of the time the accident babies are taken out by the volturi, unless they somehow just dont get noticed by humans. (garrett lived bc free food in a battle field, and carlisle being a tofu boy) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved it |
![]() ![]() What in the hell was Paul talking about Emily? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story made me have fantasies about Sam, truly :P This is the fifth time I'm reading it, and my fav part is actually the scene at the ice-box, even though it was heart breaking. I am a sucker for Paul/Bella stories as well so having a Paul who loved Bella the way you described in this fic was sweet but I hated it when he imprinted. Thanks for posting this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say, this story truly captivated me from start to finish. You have a remarkable talent for weaving words together, creating an immersive experience that transports us right into the heart of the narrative. It's almost as if you're living alongside the characters, witnessing their lives unfold firsthand. I have to commend you on a splendid job. This is the kind of story that lingers in my mind long after I've turned the final page, and one that I would gladly revisit time and time again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Delightful news! I am positively ecstatic to learn that you have breathed new life into Sam, endowing him with a strength and complexity that far surpasses his original portrayal in the books. It is a testament to the power of imagination and the boundless potential for character development. Furthermore, I must express my satisfaction at the revelation of a means to break the imprint. Such a twist adds a delicious layer of intrigue and unpredictability to the narrative, challenging the established norms and inviting readers to question the boundaries of possibility. Now, let us turn our attention to Emily. Ah, yes, this fic has managed to evoke a rather intense reaction within me. Your skillful storytelling has succeeded in transforming my fondness for Emily into a seething disdain that nearly compelled me to part ways with my Kindle in a rather dramatic fashion by almost throwing it across the room. Such is the power of the written word, to elicit such strong emotions and provoke a visceral response. In summary, I must declare this fic to be nothing short of splendid. It is a testament to your talent and the captivating allure of fanfiction. P.S. I'd love to know whether you've published any books, as I'd certainly be one of your fans. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the greatness endures! I am thoroughly enthralled by your unwavering portrayal of Sam. It is a sensation of such exquisite intensity that it teeters on the precipice of agony, for your words possess a remarkable power to elicit profound emotions within me as I journey through his narrative. P.S. I must confess, I cannot help but envision Sam as a literary doppelgänger of Connor Kenway. A fascinating amalgamation of character traits, indeed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, behold! A literary gem has graced my presence. This particular fic, my friends, is a thing of beauty. The portrayal of Sam, the enigmatic "tall-silent" man, is nothing short of brilliance. The author's adeptness at capturing emotions, crafting compelling characters, and painting vivid settings is truly commendable. It is a delicate art, you see, to strike the perfect balance between overexplanation and underexplanation, and this author has achieved just that. I find myself utterly enamored, utterly captivated by this exquisite piece of storytelling. And now, a delightful postscript awaits me. Alas! I must confess that I am not acquainted with BanSidhe, the (Possible) legendary author of "The Devil You Know." However, I am always thrilled to witness the emergence of new talent, for it is through fresh voices that the literary world thrives and evolves. If BanSidhe is indeed the mastermind behind that work, I can only imagine the brilliance that must shine through its pages! Ah, the sacrifices we make for our passions! The loss of sleep and the juggling of responsibilities, all in the pursuit of our creative endeavors. It is a struggle but one that is undeniably worth it. The intertwining of this captivating fanfic and the demands of designing an apple-flavored chemical-producing plant is a daunting task. Pure brilliance, a masterpiece! *Chef's kiss* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story so far, but the whole “talking to your inner wolf” thing sounds so demonic Like, that’s what it’s like if you’re possessed with evil spirits, haha. But it’s interesting! I wonder why Sam’s wolf is interested if he imprinted with Emily? I can understand Sam feeling sympathetic to her being lost, but I don’t understand why he isn’t more annoyed or upset at her for being friends with vampires. Doesn’t he think of her as a little stupid? I’m excited to see where this story goes! |