Reviews for Hurt
sarah martin chapter 37 . 4/16
Loved it so much and i am so angry with him that he didn't figure out a way to break the imprint earlier than this , and i absolutely love the relationship that she had with paul :D
Guest chapter 3 . 3/23
I really like that song. And this story.:)
tadah2 chapter 37 . 3/8
This was overall lovely. What I really liked is that you didn't draw out the angsty bits for longer than necessary. My heart was extra-conflicted when Paul started making his move, but I think that might have be the impetus for the rest of the story. Very good.
tadah2 chapter 29 . 3/8
If the alpha's feelings influenced the others feelings, then in addition to love for Bella from the non-imprinted, the imprinted would have a loathing for their imprints, too.
tadah2 chapter 14 . 3/8
I'd love to try to put my husband on a points system. He would outwait me, I know. My dad wasn't much of a hunter, but this much he taught me. He said, "Tadah2, a bad hunter stalks his prey. A good hunter waits. Be patient." My husband is a good hunter.
tadah2 chapter 9 . 3/7
I'm totally overstepping because we've exchanged like, one email, but-Americans rob the cradle, we don't snatch from it. And in an earlier chapter, the black chapter-Americans, particularly young ones, are more likely to associate Black Friday with the Day-After-Thanksgiving sales instead of the great stock market crash that began the Great Depression. Or maybe that's my perception of it. Black Friday-the-Sale is definitely more of a central part of our collective conscious, though.

I really like this story up to now. Good job torturing Sam, and I always enjoy spying on dudes when they're solo. XD (That sounded creepier than I meant it. Imean pretend dudes in fanfiction, or those who have given their consent, lol.)
elliefayet chapter 37 . 1/10
no wonder johnny's version of 'hurt' was on repeat in my brain the whole time i read this!

and love for nin aside, you can't beat the man in black's version... imo
xSilentSakurax chapter 37 . 1/9
Great story. I really enjoyed it. :)
AnikaHerondale chapter 37 . 1/5
Thoroughly enjoyed this story :) beautiful writing and paced really well, the relationships didn't develope obnoxiously fast but you didn't have to wait forever, you know? You're a great writer
Hope chapter 21 . 12/21/2014
I just wanted to say I loved your author note at the end.
alice chapter 37 . 12/3/2014
Loved the story very much...you made me feel a lot and almost be there with the chacters and doing that is difficult.
l have never read a Sam/bella fbefore because l just couldnt see it but you are a wonderful writer and l knew that all will turn out ok!

l would have liked it if Victoria ate Emily...it would have been a perfect way to end her. But l supose leaving her alive and misarable is even better! LOL when have l become so evil?

l am going to read Apologies and then will try your original stories :)

xoxo alice/devora13
WallWatcher33 chapter 14 . 12/3/2014
Points? For sex?
What the hell is wrong with that woman?
sarah2086 chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Love ur stories. Would love 2 get a pdf copy of this one.
sousie chapter 37 . 11/10/2014
love it
sampam69 chapter 37 . 11/1/2014
This was a good story, some parts were harder to read than others, but otherwise was really well done :-) .Thank you so much for sharing your talent
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