Reviews for もう一人の花嫁
Serinji chapter 3 . 9/30/2014
Well, I just saw Switch, decided to read some fanfics and ended up here, and I have to say, I'm pretty damn proud of your story, you got a great plot and you wrote it so well, now my only wish is for you to continue it and update it whenever you can, you really did good on it and I can tell things are gonna get interesting!
Victoria chapter 3 . 11/27/2013
PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS I AM DYING TO KNOW WHAT'S NEXT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
hitomi65 chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
nice story
CodeName A.N.D.Y chapter 3 . 6/29/2013
More? Please?

This is really good. I'm loving it so far! But, what happens next?! Please update! That would be the best thing ever!

XXXX Andy
Breyito-Black-Lupin chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
'Rather annoyed' Stupid! Why can't you just die and make everything easier?
It's too extrange hear Hal says 'Love you'...or at least, at other person that IS NOT Kai...Damn
This it's interesting! I want to know more...I need to know more! How their story begun...WHY ended...(I swear I'm going to kill her if she broke that beautiful relationship!) Nonebody deserves Hal's love except Kai! And this witch?Where did she come from?
I almost cry reading this... It's too sad! And Hal is a moron! Is he playing the stupid or what? It's impossible not notice Kai's sorrow! And why Kai didn't look for a new boyfriend? Maybe one of his old friends...or a completely new guy, that makes Hal feel soooooo jealous that he could not deny it! ;)
Anyway...I really want to know how this story will end...

Kiss!

PD-I'm from Argentina and I speak Spanish, so, sorry for my bad english. And you are right! Switch fics are sooo little bit...There is none in my languaje! So, please, plissss keep writing! ñ.ñ
PD2- I notice you like Sherlock too...we have two things in common then! :D
FayeFox chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
aaaw poor Kai ;_;
Hal get to him save him from uhm.. himself D:
Anonymoose chapter 3 . 7/19/2012
Please update your fanfiction! I'm curious to know what happends next! Will Kai kill himself? Will his relationship with Hal get better? Will the Other Kai make his appearance or does this take place after the end of the manga?
Nagareboshi-Lover chapter 3 . 1/3/2012
awwwww loved the little kiss in the beginning. the fiance seems mean! over all i love it! can't wait to read more hehehe good job K-chan! thanks for the update! kai your such a sweet hear that it makes me want to give you a bear hug!
hopeless1665 chapter 2 . 10/11/2011
So, is Hal still in love with Kai or isn't he? I feel for Kai. Make Kai happy!
AngelKittyofLove chapter 2 . 9/30/2011
hehehe so bittersweet hehe really cute! keep going!
Biotolife chapter 2 . 9/22/2011
I really liked it. :D Am ready to know what happens next, so please be quick.
Gaby.Dangodai chapter 2 . 8/5/2011
- "Is that man your boyfriend?" Kai shook his head and whispered, "Used to be… Now he's with her…" - I don't catch it... Kai was being figurative or really there was something between them in the past?

Waaaaah! I'm so curious! ~
Nagareboshi-Lover chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
this one was very sad and calming. it made want to cry with kai. he is so cute to cry indeed. i like the nurse a mother figure. Come on Hal! the only man in this world wants you and you know deep down you want him too. thanks K-chan! this fic is very good! i can't wait to see what happens next :)
Gaby.Dangodai chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Hal killed Kai to stay with Mari, or something like that. *bad english*

I like Mari-chan and I don't think that Kai come to hate her for it. Anyway, I loved. _~
Nagareboshi-Lover chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
OMG! i want more! it was very good and sad! i love it! oh please write more!