|Reviews for Humanization|
| jmc42199 chapter 37 . 2/21
| DracoWolf316 chapter 46 . 2/19
You mother F-er! I went through this whole story despite your warning, thinking you would have at least left it off on a filler chapter. Instead, I'm left with an epic cliffhanger of paramount proportions, and an emptiness that needs fulfillment.
Joking aside, I initially started out reading this because I wanted to see if there was a story about a Big Sister that wasn't just a short story or a story about some Sister/Daddy stuff. I have to say, I was blown away with how the story just keeps expanding with each new chapter. It seems like each moment I'm thinking "This is where the climax will happen, It's all going to finish soon." But then, it just keeps going higher on the suspense charts. I am very impressed as well with how you keep adding surprises, as well as new characters that become well fleshed out and serving purposes in the plot.
What I liked the most is the relationship so far between Theta and David. You don't go for those overused cliches of misunderstanding too often, and when it does happen, I can't even tell due to the unique nature of each event. Their relationship is so captivating too. It seems like a stereotypically relationship at first, guy meets girl, girl and guy hate each other, grow to like each other. But then there is so much stuff that gets in the way from outside influence that it becomes a sort of stormy sea of emotion.
Last but not least, I can't get enough of the side stories involving Alpha, Leo, and the Big Brother. They don't even seem like side stories, it's more like actual stories that coincide with the main plot. I don't know if that's what you went for or not, but it works so well that I wouldn't really care either way. The way you describe each event, it sounds like something that would actually happen in Rapture.
Well, I guess I should stop before I write an essay on this review. I just have to ask that you continue writing this. I am begging that you do. This is just too much of a good story to just give up on now. I know you haven't given up on it, according to your last post, but please don't ever stop writing this until it's actually ended.
| Person of no interest chapter 46 . 1/3
I love this story! I look forward to reading more :)
| Onsholo chapter 32 . 12/25/2013
Is it wrong that i got a massive boner for Alpha?
| antonm1107 chapter 46 . 8/29/2013
I honestly have no idea how to react to this. On one hand, the grammar was absolute shit throughout the whole story, and it deserves a rewrite.
On the other, I really REALLY want to find out what happens next.
Are you going to update the chapters one by one as you complete them, or will you just do a mass update?
| Curious chapter 46 . 8/27/2013
While I understand perfectly if you choose not to, I was curious, could you post updates on your progress of the rewrite? i.e. Ten chapters rewritten, five chapters rewritten, or something like that. I'm fine if you don't, I was just wondering if you would.
| O.SarahBear.O chapter 46 . 8/26/2013
I was so happy there was an update
But it was an authors not ;(
It's still going to be an awesome rewrite!
| Relieved chapter 46 . 8/25/2013
This is the kind of thing I was talking about. Thank you so much for at least alerting us. Anyway, I wish you luck in this particular endeavor.
| Jknight3135 chapter 46 . 8/25/2013
Do whatever you gotta do, I'll be here when you're done. :p And as a writer myself I know what it's like.
| Sad and Waiting chapter 45 . 8/25/2013
Argh! It's been over six months, I understand you're busy, you have a life, other things to do, etc. But please, PLEASE, at least give some kind of update on this story, it's by far one of my favourites on this site. And I hate not knowing anything about it's next update.
| mkz chapter 44 . 7/4/2013
im still following, and I applaud your dedication to finishing this. Keep going!
| Guest chapter 45 . 5/22/2013
Are you making anymore chapters?!
| Bio team2 chapter 45 . 5/2/2013
| Majora098 chapter 45 . 4/27/2013
This is really good, I love how each of the character's perspective is so different from each other. All the character's I feel are really believable and I love how they interact. This is such a great story. It's well written and has very good grammar, except for the occasional lack of commas I really hope you get over your writer's block. I think you've reached your Wall for this story and all I can advise is to just push through it. Your doing great work.
May your writing always get better
| Confused chapter 45 . 4/24/2013
Two things: 1. Great chapter, I can hardly wait to see the outcome. And 2. I'm slightly confused, did Thompson ever tell the others that David was going to be turned into a Big Daddy, or at the least tell them that David had a ton Adam injected into him? That is something that is bothering and hope you could clear it up. :)