|Reviews for The Promise of a Better Life|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29
Its so sad you never finished this Story. It starte great and I really would like t oread more of it.
| Marie Twinchester chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Good start cant wait to see where it goes!
| Duffy1 chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Good start. Where's it going?
| citiesofsouls chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Ooh, I like this! Can't wait for more :)
| huge sg1 fan chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
this sounds like its gonna be a very interesting story. its very unique. i've never read a story like this story. sounds great. can't wait to read more. hope you update soon. :)
| God of Laundry Baskets chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
This story looks interesting. Looking forward to see where it goes. :)
| PoeticJustice84 chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Really good start. I hope you update soon. Clayton seems a bit shady to me, might he be on the wrong side of the law? Can't wait to read more.