|Reviews for Superman: New Beginnings|
| ProfessorNafis chapter 41 . 3/2
| Guest chapter 27 . 2/21
Green arrow wouldn't be having sex at a time like that
| Vanafindiel chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
You need to use commas way more than you do. It's kinda frustrating when a sentence runs on without them. See, you have complex compound sentences everywhere, but you lack the proper punctuation.
For future works, when you proof read, and you find places where you naturally pause within a sentence, add a comma. This works rather well when you read aloud. We unconsciously know grammar, we just don't realize it.
| ShiftFrame chapter 41 . 11/6/2016
This story made me laugh my ass on and cry in happiness, relief, and sorrow. It is brilliantly well done and I thank you for writing it, it punched me in the feels many times and I absolutely loved it. You did a great job!~ :D
| grg213 chapter 12 . 7/27/2016
Ok Im really enjoying the fic so far but you are so much more focused on everyones angsty relationship bullshit that it makes up more of the story than anything else makes me feel like I'm reading the DC version of twilight.
| Tarix chapter 41 . 7/16/2016
Great story, thank you for writing it.
| Guest chapter 41 . 7/11/2016
Good story. Can't wait to read another. Love the superman / black canary is very rare pairing. I wish there are more stories like this.
| Guest chapter 41 . 7/9/2016
Superman / Black Canary
Batman / Zantanna
Green Lantern ( Hal Jordan ) / Hawkgirl
These are good pairings that deserve some more stories. Maybe do a reboot the Justice League animated series with Hal Jordan and Barry Allen replacing John Stewart and Wally West as Green Lantern and The Flash. And Black Canary and Zantanna as founders of the league with the others.
Other than that keep doing what you're doing. Hope to read another one of your justice league stories.
| Guest chapter 41 . 7/6/2016
I love this story, hope you do more Superman / Black Canary stories
| austin-flare-potter chapter 8 . 4/9/2016
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/15/2016
grundy really shouldn't hurt clark, maybe cause of magic which is a weakness but i was always under the impression it just made him live and made him stronger rather than doing external things, could be wrong tho, still, pretty good story so far, the everyone lusting after clark gets a bit old but still entertaining.
| vipeakapril chapter 3 . 9/5/2015
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| Guest chapter 2 . 8/16/2015
The farm boy and the Princess, is that a Star Wars I, or II reference?
| Brian chapter 41 . 7/25/2015
I came looking for a SMWW fic and found this rare Justice League gem instead. You nailed all the characters,especially Lex and Diana. Loved the Justice Lords portrayal,their deaths saddened me. Absolutely perfect story. I hope you write a thousand more.
| IAmN0tDead chapter 10 . 4/18/2015
Your underestimating Superman's durability, in order to make him bleed let alone crack a bone, the amount of strength required would basically destroy the entire building of the bank. A punch that sends him flying through some walls isn't even gonna mess up his hair.