|Reviews for Dear Maggie|
| Tan R chapter 16 . 10/5
Your writing needs improving. Also, Bella is pathetic.
| athome Jo chapter 41 . 8/24
| Jessika chapter 41 . 5/16
I just finished this story today and I always like to leave a note of gratitude for the free gift you fanfictions writers give us.
In your story I loved:
Angst ( wish there was more)
Foul mouth Edward
Your Bella was written well (strong but not over bearing)
Supporting cast not too much not too little also they were written well. I always love a dorky strong Emmett and a level headed Jasper, a bitchy but smart Rosalie and a supportive Alice that doesn't shop every chapter.
A lovable Charlie that understands Bella and Edward are cannon no matter what.
The Edward you wrote seemed real his emotions regarding his past his mother his sister his father.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
I will be reading the rest of your stories!
| Lillywhite1 chapter 41 . 5/16
Thanks for writing this wonderfull story.
| missmelly chapter 20 . 5/10
I just discovered your story. It is fucking amazing. I am moved to review because I am so giddy about the way you wrote Belja's first intercourse. I am so flippin' tired of people writing virgin sex wrong. How is it that in 20-7, anyone who has lost their virginity can write the experience so poorly? Anyway, thank you for getting it right. And thank you for sharing your story-I wish it was a real book, so I could buy it from you.
| jermak99 chapter 41 . 4/19
I don't know how I missed this fic! It was so good!
| evilnat chapter 41 . 4/2
I started this story when it was a newish wip and I'm not sure if I ever finished! I'm so glad I went back and revisited and got to the end, it was so good! It is well written and has a great flow. The characters are well developed and likeable. I especially liked Edward, with his grumpiness and his sweary words.
| Guest chapter 41 . 3/19
I don't understand
| Wendy chapter 16 . 3/14
This Edward makes me crazy and not in a good way. I don't think he has one quality about him I like, even when he says nice things about Bella, the mean one over power them. I would let go if I was Bella.
| hulk62468 chapter 19 . 2/21
Edward can stop being a twat and Bella can stop being so fucking weak and grow a Back bone.
| Judyblue95 chapter 21 . 1/6
I'm glad you didn't portray them as suddenly being all OK again now that they have talked a bit and had sex. It's realistic to think their issues will take a lot of work. I like this. It feels real.
| Judyblue95 chapter 20 . 1/5
I'm so glad they finally got back together. Yay!
| Judyblue95 chapter 18 . 1/5
well that is a start for him back from assholedom...good to see!
| Judyblue95 chapter 17 . 1/3
it's a start.
| Judyblue95 chapter 16 . 1/3
oh such a sad and revealing chapter. my heart goes out to Edward. he can't yet get past the guilt for liking the touch of sex even when he loathed why he had to do it. so convoluted. he is talking, finally. good.