|Reviews for Dear Maggie|
| Atwiggs chapter 10 . 10/19/2014
Oh, poor Charlie, poor Bella, and Edward, yea!
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/16/2014
I'm glad Charlie is recovering and I think Bella really needs to just trust Edward. Yes he'll be shocked and have to process a lot of emotions, but it will work out!
| Atwiggs chapter 5 . 10/18/2014
I am so loving Bella. Edward needs a good woman and a great orgasm with the good woman (Bella) tehe!
| Atwiggs chapter 2 . 10/18/2014
Wow already I am totally into this story. You are an amazing writer. Loving this so far. Thx!
| NewTwilightFan chapter 12 . 10/17/2014
I am inordinately proud of Edward, especially considering the fact he is a fictional character. He obviously went through hell before his adoption and has severe PTSD. I want to see him heal emotionally like Bella is healing physically. They seem to be exactly what the other needs. I just wish Bella's secret wasting hanging over their heads!
| NewTwilightFan chapter 10 . 10/16/2014
I thought this was a phenomenal chapter. Actually, I think it's good that these two are being forced to get outside of their heads for a change and face a real world challenge. I really hope Charlie is going to be okay. I think that if he pulls through, this incident will be the catalyst for major shifts in every character's perception of self personally and inter-personally. It will certainly reaffirm Edward's conviction in his vocation.
| NewTwilightFan chapter 9 . 10/6/2014
Oh snap. Now how is she going to tell him? He had a sister and lost her without ever even knowing? I don't know which part of the story is driving me more crazy, the sexual tension between these two damaged innocents, or the eventual revelation that she had his sister's heart.
| NewTwilightFan chapter 8 . 10/6/2014
I agree with Bella. That was an incredible first kiss! Every chapter I read I am struck by the intensity of the emotions rolling off my screen. I just love these two. They both deserve some love and peace! I hope they find it together.
| NewTwilightFan chapter 7 . 9/29/2014
I don't know how you do it, but you weave your completely original plot and characters through the framework of the original canon story and I absolutely love it. What a great chapter! I'm glad they are starting to trust each other, but I fear for how Edward will respond to the truth about his sister's existence and death.
| NewTwilightFan chapter 6 . 9/27/2014
It's good to hear a bit more of Edward's back story. I can tell it's just the tip of the iceberg, though. Thanks for another great chapter and a few more minutes of escapism!
| Fleur50 chapter 41 . 9/23/2014
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| Fleur50 chapter 39 . 9/23/2014
C'est une si belle histoire. Vos personnages ont beaucoup de profondeur. J'ai adoré.
Une jeune grand-maman.
Lu avec Google Translate. French.
| Fleur50 chapter 38 . 9/23/2014
| Fleur50 chapter 37 . 9/23/2014