Reviews for Dear Maggie
Atwiggs chapter 10 . 10/19/2014
Oh, poor Charlie, poor Bella, and Edward, yea!
Guest chapter 11 . 10/16/2014
I'm glad Charlie is recovering and I think Bella really needs to just trust Edward. Yes he'll be shocked and have to process a lot of emotions, but it will work out!
Atwiggs chapter 5 . 10/18/2014
I am so loving Bella. Edward needs a good woman and a great orgasm with the good woman (Bella) tehe!
Atwiggs chapter 2 . 10/18/2014
Wow already I am totally into this story. You are an amazing writer. Loving this so far. Thx!
NewTwilightFan chapter 12 . 10/17/2014
I am inordinately proud of Edward, especially considering the fact he is a fictional character. He obviously went through hell before his adoption and has severe PTSD. I want to see him heal emotionally like Bella is healing physically. They seem to be exactly what the other needs. I just wish Bella's secret wasting hanging over their heads!
NewTwilightFan chapter 10 . 10/16/2014
I thought this was a phenomenal chapter. Actually, I think it's good that these two are being forced to get outside of their heads for a change and face a real world challenge. I really hope Charlie is going to be okay. I think that if he pulls through, this incident will be the catalyst for major shifts in every character's perception of self personally and inter-personally. It will certainly reaffirm Edward's conviction in his vocation.
NewTwilightFan chapter 9 . 10/6/2014
Oh snap. Now how is she going to tell him? He had a sister and lost her without ever even knowing? I don't know which part of the story is driving me more crazy, the sexual tension between these two damaged innocents, or the eventual revelation that she had his sister's heart.
NewTwilightFan chapter 8 . 10/6/2014
I agree with Bella. That was an incredible first kiss! Every chapter I read I am struck by the intensity of the emotions rolling off my screen. I just love these two. They both deserve some love and peace! I hope they find it together.
NewTwilightFan chapter 7 . 9/29/2014
I don't know how you do it, but you weave your completely original plot and characters through the framework of the original canon story and I absolutely love it. What a great chapter! I'm glad they are starting to trust each other, but I fear for how Edward will respond to the truth about his sister's existence and death.
NewTwilightFan chapter 6 . 9/27/2014
It's good to hear a bit more of Edward's back story. I can tell it's just the tip of the iceberg, though. Thanks for another great chapter and a few more minutes of escapism!
Fleur50 chapter 41 . 9/23/2014
Fleur50 chapter 40 . 9/23/2014
Fleur50 chapter 39 . 9/23/2014

C'est une si belle histoire. Vos personnages ont beaucoup de profondeur. J'ai adoré.

Une jeune grand-maman.
Lu avec Google Translate. French.
Montréal, Québec.
Fleur50 chapter 38 . 9/23/2014
Fleur50 chapter 37 . 9/23/2014
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