Is it horrible that I want Elizabeth to suffer?

Edward is starting to feel. And it scares him. HE wants more but is afraid. Awesome writing

Edward never knew that he had a heart, or that he had goodness inside. He is fighting it but Bella makes him want to do better in spite of himself. Therapy WOW
Esme, the boots, Edward and Bella - loving scheming.

Meeting Maggie's parents so hard but what a loving set of parents. They exemplify the type of person most of us want to be.

The Cullens are such a lovely couple who model human kindness.

Emmett and the Liberty Bell...Edward's ticket to freedom. Jasper is a love

so much in his background and she is just what he needs. Intense

so intense but I can't stop reading it. I am on chapter 12 but had to come back to review. This story has so much and I am trying to anticipate the direction loving it

intense even before her doctor's appointment, but holy cow the garage scene with Edward and then the reveal. Boom love it

This chapter made me smile

I don’t know how you did it, but you wrote people with real issues and history without making it so depressing and hard to read. Really enjoying it so far!

“some Quileute guy” now why did he have to bring up his native roots into it...why so microaggressive ? literally couldve said “some scrawny guy” sine jacob’s younger or something . why did he have to bring up him being native i hate it here

Thanks for sharing this one with us, I loved it.

Love it! More in the future would be nice lol. Thanks for sharing

"where she'd lied on my chest for so long" It's LAY, which is the past form of LIE. LIED means only not having told the truth.

"lied down on the bed" It's LAY, which is the past form of LIE.