I never read the books, and would never watch the movies. But, unfortunately I got stuck taking two Twilight fan girls to see the movies. I like your version of that scene.

Bella was a complete idiot. Staying with the guy who put her into months of depression, instead of the guy who pulled her out of depression. I felt sorry for Jacob, because Bella was playing with his heart unintentionally. Treating him like he was more, than just her friend sometimes.

Anyway, great story.

er no! Just plain wrong!