|Reviews for Awakening|
| Poppiesnroses chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I like the way that you catch Legolas' youthful imprudence. One of my favorite parts is the opening, when you have him realizing that a tree has cut him. It really sets the stage very well for the creepiness later on in the story.
Something I noticed while reading it aloud is that you describe the way the characters say things after they've already said them. Although when you're reading silently, that's not really a problem.
I enjoy reading what you have to write. :)
| LunaQuetzal chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Wow. Just wow. You definitely know how to build up suspense! Your story was well written and the characters well described. i especially liked how you built up the air around Sauron, eventually dropping hints as to his identity until it became obvious without even having to mention his name once.
all in all, great job.
| JamieDidn'tDieInCulloden chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| Muse10 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
This was wonderful! An interesting take with great characters.
| CrackinAndProudOfIt chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
That was really good! Your descriptions were amazing, and you've created a creepily thrilling first chapter! I can't wait for the next one to actually find out what the thing was! :) *subscribes*