Reviews for I'll always win
WarAngel24 chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Aw... :3 That was cute. XD
DELETED-PROFiLE0 chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
A fair amount of the time people either use the character's names too much and make it seem awkward, or use the names too little and completely loose the reader on who is saying what. You, however, seemed not to do either of those.

And be proud, it wasn't bad, not bad at all :D
heartattack chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
ummmmmmmmm, this is REALLY adorable! i like how you did only dialogue! It's so much simpler and cuter!
PretenderX chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I have to say this is really good, I love it
sproutmilk chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I like it, though I wish there were more details. However, without those details, it leaves up to the reader to make up his own story to fill in the blanks which makes this satisfying in other terms. I also appreciated its simplicity and that it focused on their thoughts more than simple lust. :)