Reviews for Contract Labor
bosk chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
Very nice beginning. A fairly unique interpretation of the LH story line. Keep up the good work.
TaraLi chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
Wonderful to see you publishing again, and in one of the lesser-populated fandoms I love! You're doing a good job of making Keitaro strong enough to stand up to the girls, without making him so super-Keitaro he becomes the Unbeatable.

Seeing more of his backstory will definitely help explain the differences, though - though it appears he's hooked up with, and been helping, Seta for a bit longer now.

I can't wait to see more, and hope maybe when you get to it, you can give Fratello some loving as well!
Bobboky chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
very good work
S0WN2G3THrWR0NG chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
This seems like it could go in so many great directions. Loved these first three chapters and cant wait for more! Keep up the good work.

P/S: GENDO FTW!
MD1990 chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
Good story! not enough Love Hina stories where Keitaro has a backbone.
S1n harvest chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
Good stuff, little different than usual, I like it.
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