Reviews for The Rookie Chronicles
Draco Amor Mercenarius chapter 72 . 12/6/2017
This is a BADASS story, perfect job.
shadowbellator.94 chapter 72 . 3/5/2016
Well I just finished this chapter... I don't even know what to say honestly... I was thrown way off with New Mombasa and then the whole Black ops thing with Kira (?). Still a little off course with the insanity thing... But holy hell man I can tell you put a hell of a lot of thought into this...
Ny'Kle chapter 20 . 4/23/2015
Corporal Shepard. in like...Commander Shepard? Lol
The Guardian Night-Hunter chapter 69 . 8/23/2014
THE MARKER! This will not end well...
Kellise chapter 69 . 5/12/2014
And suddenly, Dead Space. If I didnt know better Id think you are trying to make so many cross overs the universe just collapses inwards. *jokey, enjoying the story*
Kellise chapter 64 . 5/12/2014
Over and out, oh god.

OverMilitary for I have ended my message, waiting for your response
OutEnding conversation, get off the line

Its a really bad film thing when they put them both together. I should point out Im not doing this because Im a dick, I love your chapters. But you dont want 72 reviews saying "that was nice."

Inless you do, because I can. XD
Kellise chapter 62 . 5/12/2014
Hmmm, could these chapters be taken up and set as a mini story (still here but also in a small collection) and put into cross fiction? (just an idea)

Axe, by the way. Ax is slang for ask. :)
Kellise chapter 60 . 5/12/2014
Im officially tripping balls

Really good, intense story so far though, although your tendency to make a character say something and have another character sometimes makes me have to double check to see who did and said what.
Only issue in the entire thing Ive had though.
Mr answer chapter 20 . 3/24/2014
Why do people always use shepered as names not a bad one just common
remember-remember chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Just a tip guys I just finished the sequel and I want to say that this is worse tuan game of throne so dont pick a favorite character
remember-remember chapter 62 . 3/15/2014
Jason, slenderman and now silent hill... what next? Fredy? The ring?
HaloKombatCraft chapter 10 . 3/13/2014
It was actually the prophet of Regret who jumped inside earth's atmosphere
Guest chapter 37 . 6/16/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
trentrex2000 chapter 51 . 5/21/2013
its flippn' slender man, hasn't Jason, uh, i mean, Trent, read any of these fanfictions!? oh, wait, this is the future * face palm*
fraz hopper chapter 44 . 5/5/2013
is price captain price from the CoD franchise
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