|Reviews for The Rookie Chronicles|
| Draco Amor Mercenarius chapter 72 . 12/6/2017
This is a BADASS story, perfect job.
| shadowbellator.94 chapter 72 . 3/5/2016
Well I just finished this chapter... I don't even know what to say honestly... I was thrown way off with New Mombasa and then the whole Black ops thing with Kira (?). Still a little off course with the insanity thing... But holy hell man I can tell you put a hell of a lot of thought into this...
| Ny'Kle chapter 20 . 4/23/2015
Corporal Shepard. ...as in like...Commander Shepard? Lol
| The Guardian Night-Hunter chapter 69 . 8/23/2014
THE MARKER! This will not end well...
| Kellise chapter 69 . 5/12/2014
And suddenly, Dead Space. If I didnt know better Id think you are trying to make so many cross overs the universe just collapses inwards. *jokey, enjoying the story*
| Kellise chapter 64 . 5/12/2014
Over and out, oh god.
OverMilitary for I have ended my message, waiting for your response
OutEnding conversation, get off the line
Its a really bad film thing when they put them both together. I should point out Im not doing this because Im a dick, I love your chapters. But you dont want 72 reviews saying "that was nice."
Inless you do, because I can. XD
| Kellise chapter 62 . 5/12/2014
Hmmm, could these chapters be taken up and set as a mini story (still here but also in a small collection) and put into cross fiction? (just an idea)
Axe, by the way. Ax is slang for ask. :)
| Kellise chapter 60 . 5/12/2014
Im officially tripping balls
Really good, intense story so far though, although your tendency to make a character say something and have another character sometimes makes me have to double check to see who did and said what.
Only issue in the entire thing Ive had though.
| Mr answer chapter 20 . 3/24/2014
Why do people always use shepered as names not a bad one just common
| remember-remember chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Just a tip guys I just finished the sequel and I want to say that this is worse tuan game of throne so dont pick a favorite character
| remember-remember chapter 62 . 3/15/2014
Jason, slenderman and now silent hill... what next? Fredy? The ring?
| HaloKombatCraft chapter 10 . 3/13/2014
It was actually the prophet of Regret who jumped inside earth's atmosphere
| Guest chapter 37 . 6/16/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
| trentrex2000 chapter 51 . 5/21/2013
its flippn' slender man, hasn't Jason, uh, i mean, Trent, read any of these fanfictions!? oh, wait, this is the future * face palm*
| fraz hopper chapter 44 . 5/5/2013
is price captain price from the CoD franchise