I have love to read your story so far and i can not wait for more

Yea, to add on to my last review, this redemption was trash, forced, and made no sense. There is no world in which the elders and some civilian, no matter how powerful they think they are, can destroy the gravestone of a village leader and hero, and not be 1) executed for treason. and 2) instantly lose all respect and any form of political or social standing and power.

This really ruined an already mediocre story in my opinion. We already have to overlook the really weird and gross furry relationship, that you got rid of the love interest of two of the most popular pairings for Naruto. And the fact that Mikoto, with basically no fight whatsoever, just abandoned her own biological son... and now also the fact that the Uchiha, the most looked at and scrutinized clan at the time of the massacre, had a secret slave branch house, that somehow no one knew about, even though practically everyone knows about the Hyugas... and the fact that Sasuke, supposedly around the time he was SIX, was trying to save his cousin... and the fact that the Hokage did nothing about that until it happened SIX times...

Now you can't even stay consistent with your own story? Sorry, but I'm dropping this, and if anyone reads this review before starting the story... just don't.

Hopefully some of your other stories will be decent, but this one is not it.

... yea, no. this Kakashi redemption play feels SO forced and fake. you literally had him gleefully leading mobs to kid Naruto, blaming Naruto for everything, while no one was around. so he wasn't *acting* for someone. This stories Kakashi is a dick, you took him way too far down that road to now say "Oh, the council forced me to do all that."

great story

good

I actually found the first 11 chapters on youtube and enjoyed it. now I'm here to read the rest of it myself.

Love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Danzo would not train Sasuke. The warhawk hates the Uchiha clan.

Sarutobi was on the floor, a huge nosebleed painting the ground. In the table, a crystal ball was showing Naruto's room and the people in it. He had tried to check on him to see if everything was fine and found the sex scene of his life.

So that is why he wanted the Advanced Henge Scroll…

But Naruto's henge is already solid! He can become anything already why would he need an Advanced Henge Scroll?!

can't wait for the next chapter

Great story so far! Hope u can update soon!
you should have Gaara slice Sasuke's hand off while it's in the dome.

that was great keep the chapters coming

Maaaaaaaan get your ass back here and finish this! Gotta see what happens next

Bruh this makes no sense it has to have pacing you made it that he gets knocked out by a mob meets the fur ball and it makes no sense like why would he trust the fox and why would he correct them what are you, a child! and like the second he saves the snake (don't say serpent or I will come to where you live and hunt your family[don't call the cops it is a fucking joke]) and a bunch of trail snakes come and he gets accepted like no pacing normal naruto 5seconds later - now friends with the furball -
now has the serpent contract and is op like WTF