Reviews for Master of Foxes and Serpents
RednBlack71122 chapter 1 . 8/2
If the Hyugas could see 180 degrees then they wouldn't be able to see behind them. If they wanted to see behind their own skill it would have to be 360 degrees
SoulMore chapter 22 . 7/28
Guest chapter 22 . 7/21
Please update
Guest chapter 22 . 7/16
I agree with you on alucard. Not only is he powerful, he is awesome and scary as HELL.
Battlesny chapter 22 . 7/14
so that's where those idiotic sparkly vampire stuff came from? that stupid kids movies... nope the're too horrible to even say the name of
sly kitsune9 chapter 13 . 7/11
Love the fanfiction and your commentary before and after it
Guestspirit chapter 15 . 6/11
It's 'take over' not conquer
Guestspirit chapter 12 . 6/11
I thought you were going to kill Ego last chapter, what happened?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4
Its 360 not 180
IcySneasel chapter 22 . 6/2
This is a good story. I hope you come back and update it again!
maxgoof296 chapter 22 . 5/23
I am patiently waiting for the next installment of this story,
Guest chapter 22 . 4/27
ArinaSugarBaby chapter 22 . 4/14
This story is interesting but has been sitting way to long it feels abandoned. Then there happens to be all these skits before and after the story. Let me remind you most of your readers are here for your stories and not your skits. Second you need to work on your grammar. Why you ask? Because good grammar helps the story flow the better it flows the more fans you get. The type of grammar that you need to improve on. Naruto picks up Neji and throws him into a three. While fighting against Neji Naruto picks him up and throws Neji into a tree. The difference should be there in front of you with those two sentences especially the correct spelling sense I am unaware that the number three is an actual object. You have a lot of words misspelled and will never be picked up by spell checker sense they are misspelled with other words that were spelled correctly. You and many other authors always want reviews that point these things out yet a lot of times it just seems like you ignore the ones that do try to help you out when these things get pointed out to you.
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 7 . 4/12
Great Chapter. Anko's test was awesome :)
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 5 . 4/12
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