Reviews for Master of Foxes and Serpents
smith.andrew195 chapter 22 . 5/26/2014
I really can't wait for more of this
Number 5 form Naruto is kurma(I don't care if that's not how you spell it) the nine tailed beast himself/herself/it not any higher due to being controlled all the dam time
Number 4 from darkriders is death because it's death
Number 3 from rwby is Blake because catgirl kicking ass also Monty own
Number 2 from bleach is kenpaci zarkki because he is the one and only kenpaci
Number 1 from hellsing is of course the and only alucard because he is a real fucking vampire also hellsing abridged is funny as all hell and can still make alucard scary as fuck
Guest chapter 22 . 3/13/2014
Update please
Dullahan2 chapter 22 . 2/23/2014
Answer:

Valentine (Resident of Evil)
Why? She goes through the zombie-company apocalypse, usually alone or with one partner. She has amazing aim with pretty much any weapon she can get, and hell, she can kill without firearms.

4. Insane Black Rock Shooter (Black Rock Shooter)

Mecha arm. Giant lance cannon. Bad ss personality. Need I say more?

3. Marth (Fire Emblem)
ExodiaGeass8910 chapter 22 . 2/19/2014
I hope you update this story soon - and I hope that Naruto gets with the young lady Uchiha soon - Naruto is SO going to have to work on his stamina when he gets all 3...
GarionRiva chapter 5 . 2/5/2014
Really wish there was a warning about this, underage lemons and shadowed bestiality. I mean if your pet somewhat can turn into a human, do you want to have sex with him/her? Maybe not. Also the lemons are quite early considering Naruto is like 10 or 12 here.
Other than that, this is a well written piece and an original concept. Unfortunately I can't continue reading as for some reason stated above.
TETRACIDE chapter 5 . 11/21/2013
...ahem...uhh...isn't naruto a bit young for...sex..? 3 (nosebleed...)
TETRACIDE chapter 22 . 11/21/2013
r u gonna update it? Plz update! even one chapter is fine! I cant wait to read it!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
Shame on you Ego for making fun of the awesomeness of Yu-Gi-Oh!, and may you be hunted by Father from FMA Brotherhood later on!
kit no kaze chapter 22 . 10/30/2013
tbh i find it funny that tsume is beating the shit outa the hyuuga clan tho i am supprised she isnt takeing hinata and marring kiba just to make shure they cant touch her love the lemons but i think naruto needs to summon more then just those 2...this is a story about 2 summoning contracts and yet we only seen like 7 of the probly thousands of summons he can perform..so i was wondering if ur going to expand that please update soon! lol
red neo ranger chapter 22 . 10/27/2013
Loved it keep it can't wait to read more
Primus2021 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
I hate Kung Fu Panda, however if they are summons, and I dont think about it ever again I'll be fine.

NaruHina Pease!
Lunarmon chapter 22 . 10/13/2013
Hope the next chapter comes soon and as for your two devil family members just give their parents the TALK and tell them that if they can't control their devil spawn and or teach then that actions have consequence than they should not bring them to someone who's willing to teach them that actions HAVE consequence, with a whip if it wasn't illegal a 10 year should be wiser than that if they are not mental and if that is the case than they should know that they should keep an eye on them before they kill or destroy something. Good luck in your story writing and if you need help catch the many mistakes just as and I'll see if I can help.
Tyrex chapter 14 . 10/5/2013
Is it a joke that every time you type THRUSTING you put down TRUSTING? It's either that or your H key is very selective when you type.
Sailor Solaris2 chapter 16 . 10/1/2013
Wow, win.
Dreaming of the Phoenix chapter 13 . 9/23/2013
You are aware, I hope, that you skipped reason number 5 when Sai and Haku were explaining things to the banshee *cough*Sakura*cough*... I should really get that cough looked at...
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