| Reviews for Master of Foxes and Serpents |
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   Tokisaki Kurumi-sama chapter 14 . 8/3/2012 It could be poisonous! |
| Luke Skyhumper chapter 18 . 8/2/2012 Please hurry up and UPDATE! I can't stand it anymore! |
| Luke Skyhumper chapter 13 . 8/2/2012 Delfim, I thank you for the great ( and lemony ) story. Though I wish for you to change a part. For the time when Viper bites Kakashi and Kakashi tries to attack him. In my opinion it should go like this: Kakashi hits Viper in the head. " Oww! " Said Viper. Viper lands at Narutos feet. The room once again filled with Killer Intent. It was coming off Naruto. This had made Sasuke pee his pants. As for Sakura, she shit in her pants. " N-n-naruto, Viper is still...um... alive. " Said the equally frightened Anko. Right after she said that Naruto ran at Kakashi... And then there is some fighting scene, I hope you like my suggestments and keep them in mind. THANK YOU! :) |
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/1/2012 Bitch |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/1/2012 Boooooob! |
| shadowhawk88 chapter 3 . 7/26/2012 that was hilarious please keep up the good work hun. |
| Silver Heart11DOOM chapter 15 . 7/8/2012 More Please This is awsome needs better spelling |
| ElementalMaster16 chapter 18 . 7/5/2012 SO! AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! |
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/2/2012 Absolutely love it! Can you make Naruto change his shape to an animal? It would be funny to have him prank people in a Tiger or Dragon form. Also he could be adopted by the Animals that he takes the form of as if he was changed into a half? Dunno what else other than letting Kyuubi out and causing hell for all the Bastards being mean to Naruto. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/2/2012 You did a typo... I think it's supposed to be niece. (Miko looked at her nephew.) |
| Kaiba1288 chapter 18 . 6/29/2012 This is an awesome story you are a very good writer, Good luck with this & any others you may write. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Peace & Jah Bless Kaiba1288 |
| Candiiee chapter 18 . 6/18/2012 Great story! Cnt wait for update. |
| Netritias chapter 18 . 5/30/2012 a good laugh hope you keep em coming! :D |
| DrakenSword0z chapter 18 . 5/23/2012 hope you continue plz |
| Banjo and Kazooie chapter 7 . 5/16/2012 Well I was liking the story, the plot anyway was good. Though your grammar has been piss poor through the entire thing, really man... Use a fucking spell checker... But I lost interest overall as soon as it appeared Hinata was going to end up with that douchebag Kiba. Try harder next time |