Reviews for Master of Foxes and Serpents |
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![]() ![]() If you do wanna make Naruto the most OP you could give him the ability to COPY the genetic ability of other characters but the more complex the genetic structure the longer it takes to copy |
![]() ![]() ![]() the only portion i didnt like was the hinata part, mainly cause im a HUGE Naru/Hina fan. plus i dont feel she would give up that easily or move on that quickly |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still waiting for an update on this story hope it happens soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next time list the harem only Naruto needs women not Anko |
![]() ![]() Ok, the top just scarred me for life... Where is the mind bleach? |
![]() ![]() Did you stop writing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yey bestiality xD Well this is somehow unexpected development but i don't care as i read HP fanfic where harry impregnated McGonagall in her animagus form... |
![]() ![]() ![]() alright, I'm rereading this story and while it is decent, it could definitely be much better. I love the premise, and the way you handled it is good, but I think it would be best for you to rewrite this. |
![]() ![]() Ye don't chase a plague tho |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue with this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() What about barbecue ramen with dango in a candy shell? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, getting bakashi saying that was seriously next level gotcha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the three judges are from god of war 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() A shit story, crap plot, insanely fast pace changing from one thing to another with no explanation as to why. |