| Reviews for Master of Foxes and Serpents |
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   naruchan84 chapter 7 . 7/27/2011 great prank in the end and love to see how hinata and ino go with their soon to be love lifes cant wait till the next chapter ja ne |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/27/2011 I vote for choice 3 for next fic Pair up hinata, kurenai, samui, yugito, temari, tenten, karin, kin with naruto as a harem! Yugao, anko, hana, mei should be paired with naruto's cousin |
| frytrix chapter 7 . 7/27/2011 well i like the story so far, altough it could have been a bit longer. ~F~ |
| Kitsune95 chapter 7 . 7/27/2011 awesome story and chapter. please update soon! |
| hi chapter 7 . 7/27/2011 Great chapter , can't wait to read more and I like option 3 |
| Yig chapter 7 . 7/27/2011 holy...shit hehehe that was some funny shit. kakashi you poor son of bitch. any way loved the prank in this chapter :) wait poor son of bitch he uses dogs maybe his father could have fucked a dog summons meh. he is some what loyal he reads porn alot so maybe he's just a horny mutt ha. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/27/2011 Two words: Check spelling. Your story is amusing and the lemon was good but you gramatical errors leave alot of room for improvement. examples You TWO not too These Make not makes As a writer I makes simmilar errors as you. I end up typing to fast and then I forget punctuation. Just keep writing and re-read your material Before posting it and you will avoid these problems |
| Narudevilfan chapter 5 . 7/27/2011 Nice chapter, I got a good laugh out of the ending with Sarutobi. I gotta say I know if I ever found out he did that I'd kill him, might be funny for Naruto and his ladies to find out that he saw their first time. |
| honorwolf1 chapter 7 . 7/27/2011 lololololololol toooo funny |
| Yig chapter 6 . 7/25/2011 This story is my favorite of all time! Thank you for sharing this masterpiece! Love the OC's there so fucking awesome. thank you so much! |
| Shadow of Sin 0 chapter 6 . 7/25/2011 Keep up the good work |
| ddcj1990 chapter 5 . 7/25/2011 Nice great chapter I like that both Viper and Hikari are paired with Naruto also I like that Anko has him as her apprentice update soon |
| Dragonrails chapter 5 . 7/25/2011 good lemon cant w8 to see more |
| Lednacek chapter 5 . 7/25/2011 how does naruto know kage bunshin? |
| honorwolf1 chapter 5 . 7/25/2011 i was woundering were that came from ahaahahahahahaah human ping pong lololololololol |