Reviews for Master of Foxes and Serpents
ibterismith50 chapter 23 . 3/14/2016
Bummer no more next button!
h20church chapter 1 . 3/11/2016
The story is very good so far
Ryuu842 chapter 20 . 2/13/2016
It's Chouza. Not Chouja.
Ryuu842 chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
The Byakugan can see (almost) 360 degrees. NOT 180 degrees.
Hybrid13 chapter 22 . 1/6/2016
i just thought about something...aizen must have been alive at some point right. i believe just figured out who he was...clark kent AKA FUCKING Superman...(mind blown)...so i pose to you your next question...people in anime previous lifes(via reincarnation)
Guest chapter 7 . 12/10/2015
... Thup._
Guest chapter 5 . 12/10/2015
no comment really no, here I'm speechless that is all I'm going to say
Zyenna chapter 23 . 12/7/2015
Dun du duuuuu! How will Naruto do in the invasion? Will Danzo be brought down? What's going to happen next! Please update soon!
Calebros chapter 23 . 11/13/2015
I haven't read the chapters between 16 and this latest one, but why are they suprised that Sasuke knows the Chidori? Kakashi himself said that he taught him the justu (after Wave) and that Sasuke almost got it working too.
Calebros chapter 16 . 11/13/2015
So Sasuke who was at the time 9 years old at the most tried to rape a girl... Are you sure you thought these things over? At times it seems you just write something new in your story and the only reason behind it is "why not?" and you don't really care how it fits in the whole story.
Like Mikoto has no problem (there was no reaction from her about it at all) that her son tried to rape Sayuri, but she went crazy when she told them about Fugaku beat her up. The priorities are a bit messed up there I think.

And you really need to reread you own chapters before posting them.
"you haven't done a prank in a long time" - said Kyuubi
Just the day before Naruto pranked the Hyuuga clan (pink paint)

So the whole "This is for what you did to sensei, monster." was what (Kakashi thought this in chapter 1)? A joke?
Calebros chapter 4 . 11/13/2015
Didn't Naruto go with them to the same class at least for his last year? Shouldn't he already know their names?
Did Naruto ask Sakura on a date in this story of yours? If yes, then why and when? And the crush couldn't have last long with Mikoto and Anko being around.
Calebros chapter 3 . 11/13/2015
Didn't Naruto just start his 1st year at the academy? So of yourse he doesn't know the basic three. And seeing what happened in the very first class it is no suprise at all.
Calebros chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
What is the differnce between serpent and snake to you in this story?
Guest chapter 23 . 10/29/2015
Awesome!
Noone important chapter 23 . 10/26/2015
Anyone else notice that the mask naruto has sounds like slades from teen titans?
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