|Reviews for I hate guardians|
| Qixity chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
My brother, my lover! Oh god
| Black Cat Le'Darkblood chapter 3 . 9/3/2015
MORE! PLEASE WHAT NOW!
| Ednylove chapter 3 . 1/14/2014
Awesome story please finish it I love the plot and envys a girl in this?! Wow that's different but good
| hurricaneclaw chapter 3 . 5/20/2012
Hmm... This is kind of an old story, but I hope you continue it :D
| Almorlyx chapter 2 . 7/25/2011
oooooo i wonder what plan greed had!
| Cha's Aegis chapter 2 . 7/22/2011
According to the site rules you agree to every time you post a story, your title has to be K rated. Including the f-bomb takes it well above that and the site admins take a very dim view on this violation.
That's an easy fix as all you have to do is change the title.
Otherwise, my only other suggestion for you is to add returns in your dialog. Having everything in a paragraph makes dialog between the characters hard to read.
| 06scarletsoul06 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
It's realy weired but i like it make another chapter plis i wanna now what happens next.
| Almorlyx chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
this is... very weird. i like it though! could ya add another chapter peas?
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
thats a really good story thanks fer writing it.