Reviews for Little Blue Heart
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 3 . 7/16/2011
Perfect...
Grizzo chapter 3 . 7/16/2011
I wish I had a buddy who could write me incredible birthday stories like this.

I just loved it. Not that I don't like long chapter stories, hence my love affair with Mergers and Acquistions, but this shorter story said everything in 3 chapters, and ended well. The best.

Again, thanks...gr
Galvestons Daughter chapter 3 . 7/16/2011
Great story and beautifully written. Would you consider continuing it to see how their relationship develops now that they have found each other
Ealasaid77 chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
Cute, a good birthday present, very little angst, which is sometimes a relief.
bbbluez chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
Fantastic ending to this lovely little story. Soo sweet:)
scrosby66 chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
Awwww. Loved it! Thanks for writing!
InactiveAccount2014 chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
Gah, Suz! I love how clueless Edward was. I had mass butterflies at the gutter comment. Your tweet just came up then about being worried about this chapter. *spank* No!

This chapter is amazing. Like "fuck-me!" AMAZING. I love how deep your characters are. You had an entire back story that made them so much more than just a Con hook up.

Just incredible. I don't want to post this review because I want to add more. Bottom line? FUCKING INCREDIBLE.

I love you and I love this.

xxx 3 *mwah*
InactiveAccount2014 chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
*sigh* I love how nervous Jasper is. It's so adorable. Again - not a wordy bitch in the least. You did the perfect amount of history behind Jasper to keep this chapter oh so sexy and sweet. AMAZING.
InactiveAccount2014 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
I can't even begin to describe how much I love this. I love how much of a wordy bitch you are. This is incredible. Everything you write is simply divine, but I love how you've fleshed out Edward. GAH I can only dream of meeting an ex-porn star. *sigh*
Beans827 chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
Awwwww, that was SOOOOO sweet, BB! Thank you so very much for all the time and effort you put into that. You know how much I love these two boys and that was just f*cking awesome! and please please please make sure you tell your friend that I loved the banner! What a wonderful birthday I had with my online Twifriends! made my day so special and I really really appreciate the kind thoughts!
CdrIvanova chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
Awww ... very sweet. And lemony! :-)
vbfb1 chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
AHHHHHH so beautiful what a perfect way to wake up on a saturday morning.

OK so you know i'm a greedy bitch so i would so love to see one more chap to this where Edward finds out about the comic and i dunno maybe they make love again cause it is just hot i dunno maybe they take edward to get a matching tattoo

Ok stop being greedy thanks for the wonderful story bb hope beans love's it as much as i do
HeartOfDarkess chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
aww! what a lovely ending! Great short story hun...loved it!
flutterfli chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
How wonderful! And thank you for posting sooner that I expected. Love that the heart was for Edward all along, actually it's pretty romantic. He had something to remind him of who Edward thought he could be; and how special Edward must feel to know that all along it was for him. Guess crushes can come true. LOL Should you ever feel like continuing the story, I would love to know more about the comic book that Jasper has created and see where they go from here. Thanks for sharing your story written for your friend with the rest of us.
Lori94 chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
OMG! AWWWWWWWWW! I LOVE IT!
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