|Reviews for The Metro Friendship|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
| Mooseofdoom chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Damn i thought this was recent...
it was a year ago...
| Mooseofdoom chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
It is a good story so far and i want to read more.
Basically what the ninja said but try to describe things more too, i.e. i have no idea what wounds Dom has.
Also a little identification would be helpful as i have no idea how old they are, how tall, how well fed, what equipment/weapons they have, why they were out of their home in the first place... stuff like that :)
But it's still awesome and the best of the metro stories i have read, you've made it very easy to care about the characters which is generally a difficult task.
Keep up the good work
p.s. Good spelling and punctuation throughout
| Guyman27 chapter 2 . 8/6/2011
I'm looking forward on your story, keep it up.
| The Dorito Ninja chapter 2 . 7/16/2011
Still a really good chapter
Make sure you don't gave those big blocks of texts
Paragraph lengths should worm not those 'great walls of china'.
I digress I loom forward to the next chapter
| The Dorito Ninja chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
It was a wonderful story my friend
I really enjoyed the interactions with the two friends a this Brett person sounds familiar.
I only saw one mistake and it was hear instead of here
It was towards teh bottom but oh well.
Keep up the work my friend and Remember, a turtle fence can truly save you one day from a horde of zombie turtles