It's nice

gods this chapter .. even in the canon i thought it strange why i could sympathise (even empathise..) with azula but lord this chapter .. idk what is it. the subtlety yet bluntness of it all the way they were raised their diverging developments and opposing reactions .. idk but ugh.

Absolutely incredible fic! Loved it to pieces.

When I finished this chapter I was shocked it was only the first, this was incredible. Your Azula was terrifying and so on point

the fic pre-chap 21: best canon-compliant zutara imo!

fic chapb21: best zutara non-canon compliant ever.

i love everythig!

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This is well written. Congratulations.

This is so well written. Been a fan of ATLA for years and yes, a Zutara shipper as well. But beyond all that, I think all this makes more sense and sits better with me than how ATLA ended. I think it's also great that it actually sets a prelude to the main issues in LoK.

Zuko blinks. That's right. Katara had mentioned that her ex (her first) was gone.

Oh. What a pity.

Lol

Ooh!

Another chapter I must comment on! Love seeing Katara's discoveries as she escaped. Great chapter!

Iroh training Aang here is amazing - so in character, so on point and well written.

I came here for the Zutara but love seeing more going on with other characters - and this chapter especially had a great writing style.

Love it!

Awww! I loved this story! Beautifully written! Well done. Now I have to see your other stories!

*low whistle* Damn. You have Azula pegged. That’s inspiring and scary that you know her so well, haha! You should do an Azula fanfiction!

Woah! I love this! It’s so completely different! Absolutely PHENOMENAL chapter.