|Reviews for One Missed Call|
| princessozmaofoz chapter 8 . 7/23/2011
Great work! I really enjoyed this story.
| princessozmaofoz chapter 7 . 7/21/2011
I really hope James gets better soon. It's so sad to read about him in so much pain. That being said, the past few chapters have been very well written.
| princessozmaofoz chapter 5 . 7/20/2011
Poor James! I hope Robbie drags him to the hospital soon. Can't wait for the next update!
| MissMcGinger chapter 4 . 7/19/2011
O-M-G I love this story and you are amazingly fast at updating so could you work your magic and get another incredibly fast update (fingers crossed). Also, I have just realised are we reading each others stories? lol. Love it :)
| princessozmaofoz chapter 4 . 7/19/2011
The suspense is killing me! Hope that you update soon!
| MissMcGinger chapter 3 . 7/19/2011
Oh poor lewis and Hatthaway. I love this story great work, please update again soon? :)
| MissMcGinger chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
yeahy this is just the lewis story i have been looking for brilliant! :)
| princessozmaofoz chapter 2 . 7/17/2011
It's very good so far.
I do have a few suggestions for minor changes.
The proper abbreviation for Innocent's title is DCS ( Detective Chief Superintendent) not CSI, and Lewis's son is named Ken, not Kevin.
Just thought I'd let you know. I remember when I first started writing for Lewis, I was totally lost in regards to just about everything. I'm still sort of lost in many respects, come to think of it.
Anyway, I suppose I'm babbling on now, but I just wanted to give you a bit of advice and to encourage you to keep going as it's REALLY entertaining!
| princessozmaofoz chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Ooo, it's really good so far. I hope you continue soon!