Reviews for Soccer
SuperFlashman'z chapter 1 . 11/20/2018
Omg I know this was made in 2012 but this is great and now cus of it I ship Belana so plz can u right a part 2 please I never beg a writer but I can leave me on that cliffhanger
Guest chapter 14 . 9/11/2012
Hi, I really loved your piece. The writing was lovely , it just seems so incomplete.
I feel like more should be said.
DannyandSam4eva chapter 12 . 8/6/2012
Loved it a little short but hey im not one to judge ecited for next review
DannyandSam4eva chapter 11 . 7/18/2012
Love it and because im needy you need to update faster lol
DannyandSam4eva chapter 10 . 7/8/2012
Absolutly love this story keep writing andd ill keep reading :D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
I've read a few of ur stories b 4 and let me just say, they r awesome! Have u ever thought about doing a crossover between ben 10 and NCIS? I think that would be really cool. And, truth be told, I REALLY want to c how Gibbs and ben would get along and how long before Gibbs headslaps him. :P and how long Kevin can keep from seriously hurting Tony. He is kinda annoying. :D
Binkasaurus chapter 9 . 7/3/2012
Update heck yes! :D

Awwww, poor Ben, has to take the blunt end of Elena's emotional messed-up-ness. Speaking of which, there's some really interesting psychological stuff going on here... This is just my interpretation, I may be wrong, but maybe winning is so important to her that she assumes that it's just as important to everyone else. That, and she probably feels like she took advantage of Ben's niceness to manipulate him and steal a piece of his reputation. (Though, given his history with Gwen, I doubt being beaten by a girl bothers him much. :P) I dunno, I'm gonna stop blathering. XD

Anyway, great chapter, I love how you let us in Elena's head, keep up the awesomeness
Binkasaurus chapter 8 . 1/8/2012
I hated Elena and now you're making me like her. How the heck are you doing this. o.o

This story is absolutely fantastic, I love it soooo much~ 3 I don't really like Belena, but since this technically fits into the canon I can't argue. XD And actually, I like how the chapters are on the short side. I feel like it flows better this way.
Ben 10 Superfan 101 chapter 6 . 10/10/2011
Ben's mind wonders easily now I wonder where he got that from?
Guest chapter 5 . 9/10/2011
Like it more please :)
graysonizer chapter 5 . 9/10/2011
I don't really know who Elena is, since I haven't watched an episode with her in it. :p However, I like the story! I feel like I get the basics of her character now. :)
Heather Gallaway chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Awesome, Sky! - guess who this could be? Yup, 'tis be Heather Alice Gallaway! 3
QueenyLeAcH chapter 4 . 8/18/2011
Let me guess, your way of stating how Ben became addicted to Groovy Smoothy.
peacelove chapter 4 . 8/17/2011
You are totally incredible Your story goes well and i think that the benlena love is growing :) andd thanks for ask FF if they could put Elena, Helen and Manny in the caracters you make it easy for me to search storys about Elena.
The Cretin chapter 3 . 8/1/2011
Hey, don't be sorry. Look at this way, I play baseball mostly so I'd say you would smoke me on the court. We're all good at one thing or another. I read all 3 chaps. Read them and loved them. I have to say this is the first Belena I've read but I saw this up and I had to check it out. You didn't dissapoint, in fact I enjoy this alot. I hope to read more if you'll allow me the honor. Keep rockin and good luck
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