Reviews for Mokuba's Birthday
JuJu-chan the Vampire chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Loll :L I love it
Muffin'sback chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
dancing elf chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Daydreamer-Of-The-Unknown chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Unfortunately I have to agree

with the other two reviewers.

This story doesn't make for a

good puppyshipping fiction.

x Casondrah Kiku x
56dyiui890f78 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
The other review might be a little harshly worded...

But this fic is FUCKING sad. I agree it might be miscategorized. I appreciate how in-character Seto is, but that also means he's a dick and super mean, which is sad puppyshipping.

It was a good heart-wrencher though!
His Georgasauru chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Dude, I think you forgot the makeup session. '

Why would they be happy at the end since Kaiba basically called Joey a whore (not literally, but basically) and says he only lives in the house for a good fuck now and then.

At the end they should of been pissed. Not happy. Also there was no humor. Throwing cake isnt funny. Besides the fact that Kaiba threw Joey onto a table so he should be in pain.

I would fix this up.