Lovely job! I think you do a great job of writing accurate and believable representations of the characters :)

すてきな

To be honest, I almost cried

Ah, so cute. Adorable. Wonderfully written.

WOW! I really love this! Great job!

Wah, so kawaii!

This fandom needs more stories about their father-sov bonding, and you wrote it amazingly we'll. I did love that episode thought, and I've always wondered how Kid's father would react.

I'm amazed you kept everyone so in character. Bravo! :)

Aw! XD That was so very cute. I loved it!

your story was so good and needs waaay more reviews, so heres one for you :) I loved it! every in charater

Loved this! I really like how you had Kid retake the test and do well but not to be turned in. Really well done! ;D

Wonderfully written! I loved it! XD

Such an intense continuation for a hilarious chapter. I like how you dig into Kid's personality and depict his relationship with Shinigami-sama. A beautiful and heartwarming story.

Great job! I LOVE IT!

I love this!

Yeah, Kid would have been mortified he got a 0. Teachers usually allow you to retake exams, but I guess the Super Written Exam is kind of a one-time thing...
Anyways, good story, and guess Lord Death is really clumsy, even with his soul... :P

I loved this the most out of all the Death the Kid/Shinigami fics on here! Not only was it well written with the characters thoughts and behaviors accurately represented, it was canon. With this, you were able to take an existing situation and use it to present us with deeper insight on the relationship between Kid and his father. I really felt that this could honestly be what went on in that gap of the Soul Eater story. Fanfics that diverge completely from the story are fine too, but this is definitely what I was looking for when it came to Kid/Shinigami fics. Pure, realistic (it kept with the established story and characters) and completely heart-warming. Great job!