|Reviews for Beautiful|
| Babysis64 chapter 5 . 5/29/2012
hey there i like your threat lol,and yes this was a good chapter also that the Cullen's had to tell Bella about them because she caught Edward and Esme doing the nasty,and then at first she didn't believe them then Edward proved it to like Edward keeps Bella on track about the story that she suppose to tell them her secret,also she never really told them what happened to her overies or finished her story on that until Edward reminded her about Phil. I can see where Carlisle is when he said i wonder why Bella is scared of being close to people,i would be too if i was in her shoes that happening at a young age i wonder why she can't trust
| Babysis64 chapter 4 . 5/29/2012
Poor Bella being abused by her step dad and she can't even talk about or even tell anyone about it,and now it is in her thoughts all the time so there fore it is trying to come out through her night mares poor girl she has to relive it every day or in Bella's case at night hopefully she can get her nerves up and talk about it to them like she said she should open up to them abit that she feels comfortable around the Cullen's.
| Babysis64 chapter 3 . 5/29/2012
oh wow too bad they can't tell Bella the truth on what they are right now cause she really thinks that Carlisle and Esme are married and that she doesn't know that Edward and Esme are married instead so this is why Bella is acting silly around them but she will respect them considering she does thing they are a couple.
| Babysis64 chapter 2 . 5/29/2012
oh no Carlisle meets his mate and she is Edward's singer not good and Bella is bleeding through the ear oh no so the head injury is a little worse then they thought
| Babysis64 chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
so let me guess this was Alice that saw the future of Carlisle's mate and of course she is 17 years of age and has been hurt badly.I wonder if they can help her get over what had happened to her but knowing Bella she probably felt like a slut and what ever not on what Phil did to Bella,to her that wasn't fair at all
| hinckle123 chapter 5 . 4/22/2012
Ok, so I see you haven't worked on this story in a while, and it's upsetting because at the present moment this little story you have is my favorite fanfic ever, in al my nerdy years of fanficing. Please continue this story, and if you don't please put it up for adoption and I will take it because what you have is really good. I've never been one for Bella and Carlisle, but I really like this one because Edward and esme arent alone, they have eachother. The Edward and esme part of the story is my favorite, and if you ever continue the story, please put more of them in future chapters (pleasepleaseplease?) I just want you to know that I absolutely adore this story, and would really want to see it finished. If you can get back to me, and tell me if you'll continue it.
Once again, Bravo, and amazing story!
| TwilightMoon11 chapter 5 . 11/5/2011
pleas contuend wirh the story
| TM Twilight Girl chapter 5 . 8/15/2011
This is a good story. I hope that you have time to continue it. I can't wait to read more of it.
| Siobhan Whitlock chapter 5 . 8/12/2011
*prepares cheek for licking*
Oh I am in love with this story!
Everything she has gone through, she deserves love, and so does Carlisle. So beautiful. :)
| Babe Pryor chapter 5 . 8/11/2011
deal. When should I expect the good Doctor? lol..so Bella had been molested before? Not surprised, unfortunately. I don't know why Charlie hasn't questioned her as to if she needed to tell him anything. He had to have known about her earlier molestation...you tell me. She's taking it well that they're vampires. Harsh she had to see Edward's boner...lol..I'd love to see that..xx
| Babe Pryor chapter 2 . 8/11/2011
I only have a sec, this was a good chapter...xx
| Babe Pryor chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I am so late, but I discovered this, and wanted to read it. Not bad so far. Ugh, Renee stays with Phil,knowing he abused Bella? Typical Renee. Its always about her.. I can't wait for ch 2, so...xx
| pizziagirl chapter 5 . 7/27/2011
like it. update soon
| fredngeorgefan33 chapter 5 . 7/27/2011
Really epic way to reveal edward and esmes relationship. awesome chapter. Please continue..:)
| fredngeorgefan33 chapter 2 . 7/27/2011
love this chpter. Great story plot. Cant wait to read more... Now I am officially in love with twilight. :)