|Reviews for Underneath the Underneath|
| fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 3/30
Funny with a childish unexpected ending. Thanks for sharing!
| EhmEhmEhm chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
No, it wasn't horrible! Not at all xDD I loved it :D This pairing kinda fascinates me and I don't know why :0 I'm just happy that you wrote it! Tenten is just the way I imagined her from the very beginning the same with Kakashi. Which means.. No OOC! I love you for not changing them into shy..creatures who are making love for the first time and stuff p.p
I like you humour XD
(as you may noticed..I'm not English - but I tried really hard XD)
| Nyla Stilez chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Not rusty at all. We need more fanfics like this! I'd love to see more KakashixTenten, GenmaxTenten, and SasukexTenten haha:)
| Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
It was kinda funny:)
| JarethxXxSarah chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
This was cute and sexy and adorable and funny simultaneously!
You should be proud!
| Sandataba chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
I see great promise in this quid pro quo arrangement. In fact, it would probably benefit the world of fanfiction to tweak the way some writers "hostage" their fics by saying: "I'll update if I reach x number of reviews", and changing it to "I'll update once Crimson Siyrean posts chapter x of Dirty Old Men, or when CatEye360 writes a Tenten x Kisame fic, go bother them now!" Yes, a two-for-one deal. Or none-for-none, but then it won't be my fault, it'll be the innocent writers who had no idea I was even going to mention them in the A/N. Oyez!
Waugh on the "sex-juice", it sounds so un-hygeinic! And I had to look up lougie, is that really a clinging booger thing like I read on Google? I see that Kakaten's relationship in this fic has gone beyond the romantic phase to the I'm-so-comfortable-with-you-I-can-show-you-my-disgusting-personal-habits phase already. Might as well be married. The pillowfight was cute, especially the pre-fight posturing and threats, but my being unable to forget the dried bodily fluids on the sheets made it icky. Well, they're shinobi, they've waded through worse. So happy you posted a new fic! You know how to stop feeling rusty right? (wink, wink) NO, not lubricant (bonks self on head to remove 'juice' fixation) Write moar! Only if you like. When inspiration hits. I'll go percolate my own fics in the meantime. Thank you again!
| Prinzack chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Not rusty, I loved it! I'm terribly excited to see your writing style again. :'D
| dybank chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
You're back! :) With great timing, I was just going crazy at the lack of TentenxRandom Hot Guy fanfiction - and Kakashi's always my favorite. :)
| Sepsis chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
That was wonderful! :D Tenten was really cool & Kakashi really funny! I definitely liked this!
| scorpion05 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
aw, sneaky kakashi ;)
good to have you writing again!
| DarkAnonymous324 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Please keep writing. Great job.