Reviews for Presentiment
Will.Hell.Minna.-Sophia Isobel chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Aww... *sniff2x* This was too short... But it was great!
Aellepi chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Your first fic? Seemed good to me. :) Personally, I enjoyed it. It was well written and all that. :)

Although I doubt that Kohane and Doumeki would have... been so intimate so naturally. At least not yet, maybe after a few decades. They both never seemed to be the kind of persons to become touchy-feely (or something like that) easily. They're both reserved, is what I mean.

I didn't like the way holic ended either. Well, the DouWata way it ended. Otherwise, I never actually cared... It just seemed like the most natural (and Clampish!) way for holic to come to an end. Though Kohane and Doumeki together...? *shudders*

yaoipurgatory chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Good story. Have you only watched the anime because the manga ends really different and has no doumeki/kohane. But great job with using the anime's plot.
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Great. Um awesome