Reviews for Where have you been?
SwampThirtyFour chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
The beginning of this fic sounds awfully similar to Tale of the Orange Bird by Kenta Namiki. Things also seem to progress too fast in your story.
roxasduelwielder chapter 3 . 3/6/2013
went to fast
Darknessss chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
Im sorry but are you coping things from other stories and rewriting them or something?
Because everything that I've read so far are from other stories.
Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
a promis made is a promis kept.
x1tears1X chapter 12 . 9/24/2011
I loved this story! One of my favs . Kinda sad to see it end but happy to know there's a sequel. And the ending was very heartwarming :3. Good luck with your future stories! :)
crazywolf1991 chapter 12 . 9/24/2011
Lol I liked the story with the scares and suprises can't wait for the future sequel I wish you goodluck in writing will keep looking forward

Love the guy who reds yo stuff

Pimp master joey aka crazywolf1991
crazywolf1991 chapter 11 . 9/18/2011
Man I like this episode I didn't think it sucked it was awesome in my book if you want an opinion for a title why not infinte hearts of battle and stuff like a story where it has all the girls except for laura killing ichika for some reaso rather for harem or rather they are trying toget a date for charlotte she would get a bit overprotective lol I'm saying it would be funny for a harem but you know I am really looking forward to the rest of your story and if a sequel then that too I really am intrigued by your style of writing so I wish best of luck
crazywolf1991 chapter 11 . 9/17/2011
Man I like this episode I didn't think it sucked it was awesome in my book if you want an opinion for a title why not infinte hearts of battle and stuff like a story where it has all the girls except for laura killing ichika for some reaso rather for harem or rather they are trying toget a date for charlotte she would get a bit overprotective lol I'm saying it would be funny for a harem but you know I am really looking forward to the rest of your story and if a sequel then that too I really am intrigued by your style of writing so I wish best of luck
ZeroXSEED chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
My first impression: WALL OF TEXT!

After reading Chapter 01 & 02: HOLY SHIT! AWESOME!

I still suggest you not to conserve the spaces, after all, count it with words, not size. The Story is good, the structure of words and grammar are easy to understand, but the formatting is painful.

Still, good job.
crazywolf1991 chapter 10 . 9/10/2011
Hey don't worry about people who read four a party. Here but you know you got some readers and thank you for making all the good stories lol I like the stories before and presently I look forward for the rest like I said these are some interesting stories here to read
crazywolf1991 chapter 9 . 9/3/2011
I gotta say this is an epic success okay keep it up
Shad0w Dash chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I feel as if you ripped off my story. I published a story that began mostly similar to this. I'm kind of ashamed of you for not trying to come up with an original story and ripping me off. Thanks dude and get some inspiration instead of ripping me off.
Blitz12 chapter 7 . 8/28/2011
Hmm, I am not really taking Tatenashi's defeat very well, since it seems like once the system was released, she just simply became helpless and lost. She isn't the strongest for nothing, which means that even if it was some unknown system, she would at least ATTEMPT to resist, which I failed to see in your battle.

I don't know if it was what you intended, but it raised some red flags about possible Sue/Stu material.
Code Sanctuary chapter 8 . 8/28/2011
I see more creativity here.
crazywolf1991 chapter 8 . 8/27/2011
Lol nice I like this chapter of fighting and waek espionage keep it up
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