Reviews for Crystal Rose
wendyvel chapter 7 . 10/30/2011
Hiya! I'm herewith my bro... Again T.T bro: hey! Hey! Hey! What's so bad about me? Me: you keep saying things that mama said we can't. Anyway epic chapter! Bro: yeah! Awesome chapter! Me: relax! Don't go all crazy and make your starfire sweat drop _ *w* anyway update soon : bro: yeah what she said!
GalaxyBangtanxx chapter 7 . 10/30/2011
Yeah it is soz :( are you from the Philippines cuz I am hehe lol I was dying for this chapter n now I'm dying for the next chapter lol haha I liked this chapter you really tried your best to get the characters to fit in their selves n it worked :D can't wait for the next chapter hope u update soon XD

Kristi heart
rairawrskazu chapter 6 . 10/21/2011
Awww... That's quite nice of you, adding me in the story! :D

Well, heck yeah it's okay to add me late, Sapphie-Chan!

I liked this chapter! When are you going to update?
All I hope is for rain chapter 6 . 10/16/2011
Hiya! I'm Kenric,Valerie's older bro or should I say wendyvel's older bro. Valerie: oi! Oi! Oi! Don't say my freaking name! Me:... anyway I'm using me and Valerie's oldest sis account. So don't ask me why the pen name is "alll I hope is for rain" kay? Anyway I have been reading your story and I got to say it's awesome Valerie: awesome? It's epic awesome! Me: ... anyway I got an OC for you and I hope you will pair me with Valerie's one! Valerie: what the fck? Bro! *blushes* Me: What?you know we are not real silbings and we can be together! Valerie: *blushes more* that's it I'm going to bed! Me: haha anyway

Name: Leon Shirayuki

Age: 12

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Gold with brown highlights freaking spiky and bangs.

Gender: Male

Occupation: water and ice mage

Magic:

Ice

Ice hands: a layer of ice surrounds his hands. Ice-styled kunai knives will surround his fingers and nails letting him fire 5 icicles per hand.

Water clones: he will put his ice hands in a body of water and clones of him will be created as much as he wants. The clones also can fight.

Take over clone: if he finds someone with a water body like Juvia, he will put his ice hands into her body and turn her into a slave. If anyone attacks the clone, the clone will die.

Affiliation: Redemption Light Guild.

Guild Mark Location: on his left eye.

Appearance: he wears a black shirt with lots of chains and wears a pair of shorts with a chain on it and he wears sneakers.

Personality: He's very tricky and mischievous, very childish in some ways too. Yet he's a strong soul, willing to do anything for his 's a

stubborn idiot at times, always charging into battles without thinking. But, he's still a very good fighter.

History: At the age of 5 soon as he saw his father kill her mother, his magic suddenly woke up and killed everyone in his village. Once he calmed down, the council arrested her and locked him in jail for 1 year. When he was 6 he was released. Having no place to go, he joined Redemption Light Guild.
ArtlieST chapter 6 . 10/14/2011
Wow! Amazing! I can't wait to see Natsu's face when he finds out that Gray already danced with Lucy! And I was about to die of laugh when I saw that Itachi and Deidara is in the chapter.. I just have to show it to my Naruto-crazy friend. ;)

/ ArtlieST
0-0-NoRmAl-0-PeRsOn-0-0 chapter 6 . 10/10/2011
,_, I don't know what to say ...It so WOHOOOOOOOOO! Awesome? O.O
Infinities Lover chapter 6 . 10/9/2011
KAWAIII! SO SWEET!

Oh...I replied with Lana and Luci didn't I...? x3 Lana andd Luci are twins and at raandom times they make me let them rview with me...x3

LOVED IT! Great almost-kiss! *squeal*
LittleEvilAngel chapter 6 . 10/9/2011
This story is getting more and more exciting ! please write more as soon as possible !
wendyvel chapter 6 . 10/9/2011
*sniff* THE FLASHBACKS WERE BEAUTIFUL! It really suited the song and you made me watch soul eater everyday... And sorry I didn't mean it in a bad way and yeah I changed back my name _ anyway Beautiful chapter _
xxXBloodyAnneXxx chapter 6 . 10/9/2011
Hey! It's me you know, 'Mary Anne THERESE!' Anyways... I luv this chapter but may I ask? When will me and the girls appear? /grin
GalaxyBangtanxx chapter 6 . 10/9/2011
I luv ur story especially the part whn Gray I mean masked man n Lucy were dancing to the song love story by Taylor swift n the were just in their own lil dream n everything around them was doing it's own lil thing :D I hope tht u may update soon n btw ur story is interesting

Angel~~~
ArtlieST chapter 5 . 9/25/2011
I'm so looking forward to your next chapter! This is one of your best stories! :)

/ArtlieST
Infinities Lover chapter 5 . 9/24/2011
Me: I'M IN THERE! O,.O YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! x3

Luci: Lana...?

Lana: *slaps Seirei* Stop being a baka! -_-

Me: lol Arrow of Justice...x3

Luci: Update soon!

Lana: Yeah we all liked it!

Me: YAY! LANA'S BEING NICE TO PEOPLE!
InuCrew13 chapter 5 . 9/20/2011
Also a BIG thank you for putting me in your story XD can't wait to see what happens next -
xxXBloodyAnneXxx chapter 5 . 9/20/2011
Hi! It's me MaryAnneTHERESE. ... this chapter is great! You wrote my OC very well. Please update soon.
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