Reviews for Attack of the Sues
Emily delatorre chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Same person who made Twilight here! AHHH! I got the singing power idea from my little pony rainbow rocks. I've dreamed about Twilight and I put all my ideas in my last post. Making a Mary sue can be a bit hard, but I got the hang of it. Plz make a story.
I'm Emily Delato chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Name: Twilight
Gender: Girl
Age: 16
Appearance: Black hair in the same pigtails as Polka, same blue eyes, same face. Wears a similar dress, except it's red and black.
Personality: she is very mature, but can be angry a lot.
Power: she sings and her songs make people argue and she is able to absorb their hate while doing this. The more hate she as orbs, the more powerful she gets. She fights with a black metal sword
History: She's Polka's twin sister( I made this up ). But she ran away from tenuto village. She couldnt stand being in someone's shadow. She hungered for power and that's when she met Count Waltz. He offered to help her if she joined him and she accepted. She was a worthy servant to the count.
Diabolical Kitsutora chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Name: Dissonance

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Appearance: Taller, for a female, about 5'11''. Shoulder length green hair that is shorter in the back. She has lavender eyes, slightly slanted which makes her seem harsh and condescending. Usually wears a black tank top which shows off a tattoo of a score piece, swirling down her left arm and ending at the tip of her middle finger.

Personality: Despite her harsh face, she is actually very kind though very sarcastic. Always willing to lend a helping hand, she tends to get herself into troublesome situations, both with good folk and bad, yet somehow always comes out on top.

Power: She uses twin blades efficiently and quickly, racking up echoes up to 24 by herself. Her dark magic tends to be stronger, connecting several powerful blows before delivering a final blow with a summoned meteor.

History: She and her twin brother Elegy have been traveling since the age of five, at first with their mother, Duet, until she was killed when they were 10. This spurred an anger in Dissonance which lead her to her journey to rid the world of evil. While traveling, they took refuge in Andante for a while and joined up with Andantino's rebel group. There is when Dissonance trained herself to become powerful enough to reach her goals.

Name: Elegy

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Appearance: Tall, 6'7'', with long dark green hair. Usually kept in a low pony tail, it reaches below his tailbone. His eyes are large and round, also lavender in color. He wears a blank tank similar to Dissonance's with a matching tattoo swirling down his right arm.

Personality: A contradicting fellow; he is very laid back but say one word about his sister and he goes postal, his anger getting the best of him. Unless the situation hits close to home (family or friends) he is content to sit back and watch a situation play out before he decides to help or not. Despite his rather carefree attitude towards everyone he doesn't care about, he isn't heartless, it takes rather little for him to become attached to a person, animal, place, or thing. Also has a tendency for being dramatic.

Power: Like his sister, he fights with twin blades, but his true abilities lies in his knack for inflicting status ailments on his enemies, or bolstering his allies power to ridiculous levels. While not very powerful by himself, he is able to support his sisters' abilities to the point she can down an enemy with relative ease, if not with on blow. He is also a very capable healer, though his remedies do not always look or taste appetizing. They also sometimes have... odd side effects.

History: Like his sister, he was filled with a deep rage when their mother, Duet, was killed. However, instead of training his body, he trained his mind and his knowledge of herbs and other items with which to make several kinds of potions and elixers that either help or hinder. While in Andante, he became very close with Falsetto and has a mild crush on her, though her feelings towards Jazz drives him nuts. Once they continued their journey, Elegy had a tendency to create trouble (if Dissonance hadn't already gotten into it) with his flair for the dramatic.

At the age of 11, he has gotten into his fair share of bar fights without the aid of alcohol.

Both together are unbeatable.

Hope these work for you. (3
rainbowstarwishes chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Hello! :D

Name: Demi

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Appearance: has pink hair split into 2 braids that goes up to her chest with pink lines on it and little hair sticking out - some part of her hair is spiky and bright yellow eyes.

Personality: Very cheeky,sometime can be very girly,airhead but can be smart when comes to collecting some information about their enemy,kind to people who she can trust,career,likable and don't always take everything serious but when time to fight,she goes very serious.

Power (Optional):

History: When she was 5 years old,she and her parent were planning to go another village together to live there because something happened in her home village but that was lie, because on the day they planned to go today,she find her self that she's on boat. She screamed for help for long time when she saw piece of paper,she picked it up and read paper says:

To Demi,

I'm sorry Demi,but we have to do this by leaving you in boat alone.

love from your parents

Demi cried so she never able to trust anyone..
Sanctumna chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
LOLOLOLOL Great idea.

Let's see if I can make a Sue too XD

Name: Chiuso

Gender: Girl

Age: 19

Appearance: A little taller than Polka, skin is very light almost white, deep black hair with one green streak on the left of her head, her left eye is sea-blue, and her right grey.

Personality: Treats people the way they treat her. Believes strongly in justice and wants to stop Waltz from destroying the world.

History: Her mother was raped and got pregnant, she died soon after giving birth and so the woman who helped her mother took her in. This person was a priest of EZI and so Chiuso grew up surrounded by EZI and believes EZI will help her at all times. What she doesn't know is that the rapist who raped her mother was EZI in disguise and so she is unknowingly the child of EZI.

LOLWUT child of EZI... hope you're able to do something with this XD
rexflame chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Name: piccolo

Gender: girl


Appearance: She wears a light pink dress, shoes that are like salsa's and has a wreathe of flowers in her pigtailed blonder hair. she has sparkling green eyes.

Personality: she is kind, sweet, and always wants to help people. everyone loves her and she is like a little princess

Power: umm... She can use sunlight to heal(wow. pokemon girl. AHHHHH!)

History: her mother and father died when she was 5, when Count Waltz found her and took her in like his little sister. She has no sisters or brothers.

Love interst: who do ya think. The count.

(wow, its harder to make a mary-sue when you try to XD)
GimmeAllYallsPicklesRikku chapter 1 . 8/15/2011

Name: Mia Rite

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Personality: Um... likes to skip. Just cover dah basic Mary Sue stuff. Flirts with anyone that owns a car. The perfect girl

Appearance: Light blue hair with light yellow streaks. Light yellow mini dress. Deep purple eyes. Purple finger nails. LONG eyelashes and hair.
Grayjack72 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Name: Meter

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Appearance: Tall and handsome, his long, blonde hair flows in the wind like a stream.

Personality: Hard to anger, a kind soul. Intelligent, charismatic, and cunning. He fights for his friends.

Power: His right arm can turn into a great black claw, with the power to completely erase people from existence. A contrast to the kind, caring soul he really is.

History: His mother and father never got along, constantly fighting. When he was 5, his father killed his mother and kept him locked in the basement. For the next 6 years, his father beat and tortured him daily. When he was 11, his father died of a heart attack and he finally managed to escape. For the next 5 years he lived in the streets of Baroque, stealing to live. One day, he saw a woman being attacked. He tried to intervene, but was brutally beaten. A few days later he came across a mysterious woman. When asked what he wanted most, he said the power to fight for what he believes is right. It was then that he got his arm.

I hope that's Gary Stu enough.