Reviews for With Every Breath I Take
annaharding chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Awwww - I love his parting line!
Thanx so much for giving this little story a happy ending - it could have gone SO much worse.
Thanx for sharing!
mountainlion718 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
great job! so happy he made it home!
snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Ahh... That was sad... I was expecting it to be worse..
vbfb1 chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
OMG this was beautiful i totally have a soft spot for firefighters so beautifully written
Newbeginning91 chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Aww i love it
hdink chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Love that he came home to her and they got their happy ending! His way of saying goodbye with his forever and always line is so sweet! Good luck with the contest!
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
great o/s, short and sweet!
DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Loved it...

GREAT LINE: "Forever and always, with every breath I take."
twimom817 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
This was a good story!
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
That was beautiful!
KeeWit chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Good story. I know it was meant to be a serious story, but I couldn't help laughing every time I read "sole" mates. I kept picturing a matching pair of shoes. :)