This is full of flaws but what story isn't? I still have some concerns regarding inconsistencies in logic in this story but I'll let them pass. This was overall a pleasure to read.

Nice.

Nice fight.

I won't lie, the romance has been subpar at best. They just seemed distant friends in one chapter and suddenly, in the next one they're flirting.

wow this has been impressive af so far

Why tf didn't he kill her? This makes no sense. Disregarding her future actions she had still at that point murdered her father and grandparents, additionally, she was in the process of killing Ginny as well and all that is without taking into account her future actions. Yet still with just some vows she is being allowed to live relatively free of cost of her actions? What in the actual fuck? At least make it make sense.

Bruh how did you make me feel fluffy from voldemort of all people
This changes everything HAHA

Nice story! Thank you :D

beautiful!

Great story loved it ... And while its a bit shorter story i did not feel like something was lacking .. just perfect
its refreshing to read shorter story sometimes

Hope you didnt die

Good story. Very fast paced, but I didn’t mind.

Just Perfect!

This is a fairly fast paced, clever and entertaining story where diary Riddle and Harry become a team/lovers. Harry is older than in canon (and tutors the younger Hermione which I thought was funny). The story is well written. Recommended.

This story had potential but I'm not going to lie you lost me on this chapter where in my opinion you made it seem like a lot happened when nothing at all happened...plus why does everyone have the whole "big snake must fight" lodged into there skulls? Harry can make his life a lot easier and in my opinion more interesting if he oh I don't know did the thing that made him so special in this year and actually bloody talk to the snake. We know he can hear and understand it no matter how far you tried glossing over that fact or push it down he can still talk to them, for a supposed Slytherin he's not at all clever or cunning more dumb run in head first hoping his skull doesn't crack lion then smart snake why Change his house if you're going to make him the same?

Awesome!