Reviews for Thunderstorm
pixelherodev chapter 11 . 1h
Somewhat disappointed by the ending TBH. More of their adventures would have been awesome!
brodylopa chapter 11 . 5/26
Its a decent short story would have liked it to go a bit longer maybe a epilogue but i don't regret reading it
myafroatemydog chapter 11 . 2/23
Pretty awesome chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 10 . 2/23
This was amazing
myafroatemydog chapter 9 . 2/23
This was a pretty great chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 8 . 2/23
This was an excellent chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 7 . 2/23
This was an excellent chapter. It gets more I triguing
myafroatemydog chapter 6 . 2/23
Crazy chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 5 . 2/23
This was a good chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 4 . 2/23
This was an excellent chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 3 . 2/23
Pretty great chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 2 . 2/23
Interesting follow up chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 1 . 2/22
Interesting first chapter
DanKing chapter 11 . 11/13/2017
Awesome story i really enjoyed, keep it up ;)
AraelDranoth chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
'I' killed the story by using 'I' in place of Harry or Harriet.

You may as well have written a Mary Sue fic.
Nevertheless the writing itself is solid so well done there.
254 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »