|Reviews for The Fall of Man|
| LumioneAtHeart chapter 1 . 7/9
EDEN is one of my favourite Lumione pics. It is so well written that I, as a reader, can't help but sympathise with both Lucius and Hermione. They did stay true to their character. Please please please are you able to recreate Eden using Lucius' POV - just like what you did in here. I am sure your readers will be really grateful for that! And thank you so very much for your stories specially the Lumione ones (huge fan!) - they never fail to make my day great!
| thepotionsguild chapter 1 . 3/11
This breaks my heart
| Capt.DorkyBadass chapter 1 . 1/8
I read Eden and been dying to know what Lucius Malfoy had been thinking all those times. He's a complex character that want you to probe further of what makes him tick. I'm still at awe how they manage through everything through hate to love. How Hermione breaks through that ice armour of his. To wish to read his POV on chapters 29 and all those chapters when he finally admits his love for Hermione - those painful 24 hours and till his last breath. But I don't think I can manage, thinking the "what ifs" of his thought always makes me cry. Honestly, my tears would fall eveytime I think about all those Lumione feels. You touched my soul with this story and I thank you for that. The feelings are just so realistic! You're awesome! Coz you made me cry.. Goodness! You ruined me, how am I going to find more good stories. Am I crazy to want and think of Lucius alive? I know that he will only be brought to Azkaban and be condemn of what he did to Hermione but I want him to be happy with her.. To experience happiness and prove to the wizarding world that he Lucius Malfoy id also capable of feeling love; to love and feel love. And also, to forgive himself of all the wrong doings he did but we all know its his only choice coz' its the only thing he knows all his life until Hermione. I know its sappy but some part of me died with Lucius That's how awesome you are. I feel like Hermione; I felt her pain and her heart burst hearing Lucius saying I love you. Is it sappy to think that they are each others twin souls?
Okay I'm going to stop my blabberings but you brought this to yourself, obsessmuch. Thank you, thank you so much for writing and sharing this heartfelt, wonderfully painful and soul touching story.
P.S can you make an AU of this where Lucius leaves and persue their relationship with Hermione :D or his POV's from chapters 29 and those final 24 hours or more with Hermione? Pleaseeeeeeeee
| Lucille Sharpe Laufeyson chapter 1 . 11/3/2016
Thank you for this special chapter. I have always wondered how Lucius felt and tought about their "relationship"
Eden is the best fanfiction I have ever read
You have a gift
| FoxLittleRedFox chapter 1 . 7/21/2016
This was a very powerful piece. Such an emotional overload, your style is a perfection.
They are both very much in character and the situation they found themselves in -unavoidable.
I didn't read "Eden", I really want to, but I'm scared. I checked reviews and they are stellar. But as I come out of depression now, it's probably not the best option for me. I'm hoping one day I'll be able to, as I feel I'm missing out on the best story out there.
Thank you for this "little" preview. I'll be in touch.
| bloomsburry-dhazellouise chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
This is was the story that turned me into a Lumione fan. I wish you could write more of this. I mean seriously.
| Kittenprawn chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
Helloooooo ! God, THAT was beautiful. I mean, I've read Eden when it was translated in French, something like four years ago. And I was a huge fan, but as the story is not findable anymore, I just re-read the fiction in English. Anyway, I didn't know this OS existed, and Lucius POV is what I truly wanted to read one day. He is exactly how I imagined him, and I'm so grateful you at least wrote this chapter. I know reviews are the best salary to a fanfiction writer, so I leave this comment to tell you that I love your writing, I love your imagination and the way you adapt the characters with a REAL FREACKIN PERSONALITY (not like a LOT of others fanfictions). I'll probably take a look to your others writing after that. See you ! PSI probably did some mistakes, sorry about that.
| S.V. II chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
Oh wow. Reading this from Lucious' POV was otherworldy. The emotion was so raw it hurt to read it. But of course I was drawn into every painful word. Lovely writing. :)
| 021448740041987 chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
PLEASE WRITE MORE LUCIUS MALFOY FANFICTIONS. I LOVE HIM SO MUCH. NO ONE WRITES LUCIUS BETTER THAN YOU. I THINK JK ROWLING SHOULD OFFICIALLY GIVE LUCIUS TO YOU SO YOU CAN ADOPT HIM AND HAVE LOTS OF BABY FANFICS TOGETHER.
| DutchScorRosefan chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
Thanks for this POV. It doesn't make it less painful though. Even more so...
| Jaycie Victory chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Your writing... My goodness, your writing. You embody these characters. Unbelievable to read this and compare with chapter 26... I... am... basically speechless. Part of me wants to ask you to rewrite the whole story from his perspective. Part of me isn't sure it can cope. Eden was bad enough. I
| fanreading chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Wow. What a ride! I should have checked your other stories way sooner! I'm happy you're doing well and hope you still are. This is a great chapter! I love it a lot.
The ending seemed kind of sad. Her blank and empty expression makes me think what happened was rape or bordering really close to it. I don't think it was, but I may be wrong. Perhaps she was just in shock. He doesn't exactly wear his emotions on his sleeve. Is this the chapter where he realizes he's in love with her? But people don't change that fast. But then again this was a big event. I think I'll reread the story again to see. I mean, he still talks about what happened as a type of power play. He says 'conquered' and that he has what he's 'wanted for so long.' Wasn't that domination? It's so complicated and so real
| AmazingFreedom chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
you're brilliant! your whole story is brilliant! everything is brilliant!
I mean, I read Eden and I've just read this!
I've understood lots of thing but it has been strange looking into lucius' mind.
I hope that you'll write eden from lucius' POV... it will be really interesting.
| ilovevoldemorttruly chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Oh my God that was wonderful. Please, please, please do the whole story through Lucius's point of view.
| roon0 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Goodness me that was intense. I loved it.