Reviews for Star Fox: The Omega Chronicles: Book 1: Lylat Wars
Colonel mael radec chapter 12 . 4/22
Chief is very ooc
anton whitt chapter 21 . 8/14/2014
i loved the story great job
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
you do realize cortana is not a living being like master cheif.
Rook115 chapter 11 . 6/27/2013
Mike Yankee Sierra Oscar November...
My Son

wow... that took me 15 minuets to get that... that is sad.
good story, cant wait for the new one to finish.
Siphon 117 chapter 20 . 2/7/2013
I like it the way it is, but thats me. If you want to rewrite it, thats fine, so long as you leave up the original. I personally like seeing hte Master Chief in battle helping Fox, but thats me.
Siphon 117 chapter 15 . 2/7/2013
Okay, total copy and paste of the Drop from the book Halo: the Flood, but I'm still reading the story. Pretty good so far.
Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant chapter 18 . 2/5/2013
I only have one criticism about this story, and that is only one misspelling you've made.

"I understand...but Wolf, just try not to get too wreckless.

Thats not how you spell reckless in that sense, but 'reckless'. Just edit out the 'w' and then your done. That's all!

BTW, this is a really awesome story you have writen!
RCSCC AGAMEMNON chapter 11 . 10/19/2012
hey! Bravo-Zulu on the crossover, assuming you know what that means because you used international codes in this. anyway, i was wondering how you knew them. if you could please e-mail me the answer at
Charlizard777 chapter 3 . 10/2/2012
Just read chapter three and I'm liking the story. I have to admit that I kinda thought about having my fanfic oc characters do this. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this.
Dimensional Wanderer chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Excellent work! This is one of the best Halo and Starfox crossovers I have read. Congratulations, on a job well done.
Species Unknown chapter 17 . 5/10/2012
umm...Katt is spelled with two t's and she's pink not black
soldier chapter 8 . 5/9/2012
whens halo coming in ?
criticalkill chapter 19 . 2/21/2012
A warp up is a wrap up, there not meant to be the longest chapters out to be honest, I could've cared less about the wait, i'm just glad you put an ending to this book and started up on the second one. Poor, poor, Panther, I hate to be rude but it finally looks like he got what he deserved. I'm glad this chapter isn't a long one. When you end off a story, or in this case a book, you don't want an extremely long chapter that describes what happened through the entire turn of events, that's what the story is for. So all-in-all this was a good chapter, and I can't wait for book two, unless it's out already, then I'll seem like an idiot, peace.~Criticalkill
Major Simi chapter 19 . 2/19/2012
well this is war and in a war people die,well a bit short this chapter but ok. keep going
ItsDaKoolaidDude chapter 19 . 2/18/2012
happy ending... will there be more of those serpentis ppl or were they just nomadic?
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